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Music of the Night

The light of day – how it blinds my eyes. I need the dark of night to see! Love, may I come and be with you where shadows play like music in your mind? I want for the thread of your lovely song to entwine you and me in a dream profound. Together then bound – we shall dance in night’s delight. For nette onclaud's On Broadway contest Theme #1: Music of the Night

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Date: 8/25/2020 6:28:00 PM
This is gorgeous Andrea, beauty and sensuality. Thank you for your comment on mine. You are one of my favorites too.
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Date: 8/23/2020 12:39:00 PM
Creative, beautifully spoken tenderness, so romantic! You have masterfully described the beckoning of an entwining midnight dance. So well done. Congratulations! High fives! Kudos!
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Date: 8/22/2020 3:50:00 PM
This one must have snuck by me back in June. It is full of delights of night and music. Love the lines "I want for the thread of your lovely song to entwine you and me in a dream profound." Congrats on your win today, Andrea.
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Date: 6/25/2020 12:51:00 PM
Lovely lines and for the fact the theme is centered on music makes it the more enjoyable. Great poem
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Date: 6/24/2020 12:56:00 PM
You've rose well to Nettes challenge, beautifully composed Andrea. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 6/24/2020 10:19:00 AM
Beautiful write Andrea, you know how much I love musical writes, if for a contest should do well!
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Date: 6/24/2020 7:47:00 AM
That's some thread...Lovely romantic thoughts..
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Date: 6/24/2020 7:14:00 AM
Lovely invitation to love and romance, Andrea--in keeping with the theme of music--melodic, lyrical...
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Date: 6/23/2020 10:14:00 PM
Very romantic! I think most entries will be inspired by this song. I saw Phantom of the Opera many years ago and this is the song I remember the most. Best of luck. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 6/23/2020 7:41:00 PM
Beautiful verse Andrea, GL in the Contest..
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