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Music of the Heart

The writer combs the breeze for the salt tears of the aching heart. Drying them with his words, he casts the salt in the dry eyes of the hearer. And thus, we cry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/18/2015 7:14:00 PM
Wow, is my response too. So creative
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Bill Lindsay
Date: 9/19/2015 5:28:00 AM
It still makes me almost cry when I read it, thanks Shirley ;)
Date: 8/2/2015 8:00:00 PM
Nice poem.
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Date: 8/2/2015 5:39:00 PM
Ouch those salt tears.. yes I can watch them being combed in the breeze of others and winds of my own . Love your shape poem.
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Date: 8/2/2015 4:34:00 PM
wow, what a sensitive poem! Very creative.
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Bill Lindsay
Date: 8/3/2015 3:41:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea; coming from you, that is praise indeed ;)
Date: 8/2/2015 3:11:00 PM
A beautiful write here, a writer's world is great, she can do a lot of things. I like your write it is excellence...........A.M.
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Bill Lindsay
Date: 8/2/2015 3:25:00 PM
Thank you, Afolabi; this is one of my favourite pieces ;)

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