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Music of Bells

Careful steps lead me to an old temple Perched across a bay, weeds on a float Where dew refills bowl of greyish clouds And tender breeze hanging on toes of sky. In stillness , I offer my unsaid prayers For the world that's here and far away Reaching that point where mind is absent Aloft the mountain tops and daily life. Then I hear them, a rhapsody of chimes Lifting me higher, regulated gongs---bells; A music swelling in warm temperance Until fireflies and birds enter my veins. For a treasured moment, a holy energy Cleanses my air from unknown past sins As one last toll strikes, I feel transformed Into a bay of nothingness except bliss. The pulse takes me back to awareness Knowing how serenity can entrance My view of life entangled by loud hours---Yet, bells remind me to stay quiet. I am changed. Brief, Unforgettable Moment of Nette Onclaud 11..23..13 Carly Lalion

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Date: 12/1/2013 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend Caryl! Thanks for sharing your great write as well. love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/29/2013 10:20:00 PM
An amazing poem...I especially love the last stanza...congratulations on your win..
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Date: 11/29/2013 7:20:00 PM
Fantastic to my fav's and a 7 fav lines [tender breeze hanging on toes of sky][fireflies and birds enter my veins.] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/29/2013 12:06:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: - BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT / / Nette Onclaud contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/23/2013 11:23:00 AM
Carly, you have awaken the YOU that needed change. The image of bells, alarming your senses, is very deep. i am impressed how the memories of this loud noise brought you closer to the perfect feelings of what bliss and tranquility.. Thank you for the stunning write... LINDA
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Date: 11/23/2013 5:07:00 AM
precious moment, holy energy. Carly, I like the sound of bells. I enjoy chimes, some how they relax me, and remind me of my childhood. have a nice day. Skat
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