Music Box Memory

Music Box Memory

‘The spiral staircase made her high heels sing’
slightly off key as they were borrowed.
She danced, each step a spiral upward,
spinning in the sights and sounds and scents,
carried on the joy of such a dream
rising on the cool of fall chilled air.

He watched her childlike innocence explode
a laughter turning giggles into tears.

’From here the city churches pierced the mist’
long marble fingers stretching toward their gods
could only hope to find the joy she had
in reaching out to touch the bowing moon.

He felt the touch of petals on his cheek
the kiss of memory’s ever lasting thrill
the sound of dance steps in a music box
’He closed it, and, now smiling, crossed the square.



©5/7/2018


submitted to – One nine and sixteen upgrade version – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Viv Wigley

Lines 1,9. and 16 provided as prompt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 6/22/2018 9:32:00 AM
Beautiful story, John. Many congrats on your win. elaine
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Date: 5/9/2018 8:15:00 PM
So sweet; so touching! Magical ...Excellence in poetry, John. ~ Gershon
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Date: 5/9/2018 8:56:00 AM
John, so beautifully penned, I could image the scene perfectly, well done
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John Lawless
Date: 5/9/2018 5:37:00 PM
Thanks BW, this poem had a very interesting "evolution" as it changed shape as i wrote
Date: 5/8/2018 8:32:00 AM
Great read my friend...love and light...^WW^
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John Lawless
Date: 5/9/2018 5:34:00 PM
Thanks WW, It was an interesting write as each line changed the direction in which I thought we were headed
Date: 5/8/2018 7:36:00 AM
Well written John. I enjoyed this :)
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John Lawless
Date: 5/9/2018 5:33:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I just let the muse off the leash and followed....
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