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Mushroom Picking

In the cool of an autumn morning
my father and his friend, 
Jimmy Kerin, would go
mushroom picking in paddocks 
way out past the last suburban fence.
I would tag along not to pick
but feel the freedom of open land
stretching as far as the eye could see
and for the pleasure of the ride.
I would sit in the back seat
of Mr Kerin’s 1950's Skoda, taking
in the smell of the leather 
and laying out along its length
like a ferried prince.

I can remember the wet, green
paddocks, the cold dew being 
flipped up to coat the back
of my bare legs as I walked.
Then, seeing a carpet of white crowns
pushing up through the short grass,
plump eruptions catching 
the morning sun that got my Dad
and Mr Kerin excited and set them off 
decapitating the tallest with their kitchen 
knives. They soon would each have 
a bucket full, some mushroom heads
as big as Dad's hand.

That evening the ritualized meal
would be acted out. Dad sitting
at the table waiting, Mum frying up 
the mushrooms in a cast iron pan
then making the juices into a thick
buttery gravy. It was a celebration
with Dad voicing his pleasure 
on downing each savored mouthful. 
Mum and us kids would look on,
none of us could stomach the taste
of fungi and instead, tucked into 
tomato soup and toast. 
Such simple memories seem
to cling onto life as if sensing 
autumn, stirring deep in the self's soil
to poke their heads up here.


Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 4/21/2024 6:58:00 AM
It's simply amazing how you so adeptly bring words on a page to life, Paul. I could clearly envision you feeling like a prince being ferried in your leather seated chariot to fields of freedom. I could nearly smell that buttery gravy your mom cooked in the best cookware of all... cast iron. I would've begged your dad for a taste of his fungi instead of tomato soup. (never liked that soup) Great writing... as ever.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/23/2024 2:24:00 AM
So appreciative of your comments Lin...good to get such feedback. Thankfully my taste buds have matured, a good feed of mushrooms is now a treat...tomato soup...yuck !.

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