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Mushroom Picking

In the cool of an autumn morning my father and his friend, Jimmy Kerin, would go mushroom picking in paddocks way out past the last suburban fence. I would tag along not to pick but feel the freedom of open land stretching as far as the eye could see and for the pleasure of the ride. I would sit in the back seat of Mr Kerin’s 1950's Skoda, taking in the smell of the leather and laying out along its length like a ferried prince. I can remember the wet, green paddocks, the cold dew being flipped up to coat the back of my bare legs as I walked. Then, seeing a carpet of white crowns pushing up through the short grass, plump eruptions catching the morning sun that got my Dad and Mr Kerin excited and set them off decapitating the tallest with their kitchen knives. They soon would each have a bucket full, some mushroom heads as big as Dad's hand. That evening the ritualized meal would be acted out. Dad sitting at the table waiting, Mum frying up the mushrooms in a cast iron pan then making the juices into a thick buttery gravy. It was a celebration with Dad voicing his pleasure on downing each savored mouthful. Mum and us kids would look on, none of us could stomach the taste of fungi and instead, tucked into tomato soup and toast. Such simple memories seem to cling onto life as if sensing autumn, stirring deep in the self's soil to poke their heads up here.

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Date: 4/21/2024 5:00:00 PM
Your poem allowed me to imagine the freedom you felt in tagging along. I could see the fields, the mushrooms, and imagined how princely you felt. I also could smell the cooked mushrooms as well as the distaste you had for the fried mushrooms. The last four lines though were smoothly interjected bringing meaning to your memory...a skill not many can do. Hats off to you! Am faving this one, Paul. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/23/2024 2:28:00 AM
Good to learn that the poem set off your imagination Sara...your kind words very much valued. Its good to bring a few memories out of the filing box, dust them off and give them some air. Take care my friend.
Date: 4/21/2024 6:58:00 AM
It's simply amazing how you so adeptly bring words on a page to life, Paul. I could clearly envision you feeling like a prince being ferried in your leather seated chariot to fields of freedom. I could nearly smell that buttery gravy your mom cooked in the best cookware of all... cast iron. I would've begged your dad for a taste of his fungi instead of tomato soup. (never liked that soup) Great writing... as ever.
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/23/2024 2:24:00 AM
So appreciative of your comments Lin...good to get such feedback. Thankfully my taste buds have matured, a good feed of mushrooms is now a treat...tomato soup...yuck !.

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