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Muse In Freedom

I walked through the desert looking for my muse, on barren land so dry Sand stinging in the wind, across the cliffs, beneath the sky I walked through the woods looking for my muse, on dampened moss and sinking ground Lost in trees all looking the same, in every direction around I walked empty roads with no-one passing by, on pavement cracked beneath my feet There seemed to be no signs, directing where to turn on any street Then, I came across a golden field, wide open, welcoming me On a parting path from footsteps, there was my muse, it had been free Heidi Sands 6/17/20

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Date: 7/2/2020 5:51:00 PM
Hello Heidi, oh this is so different. Enjoyed it. Haaave a nice evening my friend. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/3/2020 1:48:00 PM
Heidi You are welcome enjoy your day my friend.Hugs.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/3/2020 10:30:00 AM
I am happy you enjoyed it. Thank you Darlene! Hugs :)
Date: 6/24/2020 10:46:00 AM
I just love this, Heidi. I can identify with the sand blowing and stinging wind. My legs were whipped by sand many times, but it was a long time before I ever heard of a "muse."
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/24/2020 12:58:00 PM
I am happy you love this one. Thank you Sunlite. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 6/20/2020 2:45:00 PM
Such a lovely thought Heidi and I am so glad that you donut your muse!! Happy Saturday xxoo I hope you are very well !!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/20/2020 3:13:00 PM
Thank you Mike. I hope all is well for you. I appreciate your comment. Happy Saturday :)
Date: 6/19/2020 12:17:00 PM
Love it Heidi! So creative. A favorite! Welcome back.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/19/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Sandy. That was quite a journey, trying to get back! :)
Date: 6/18/2020 8:47:00 AM
Delightful poem which , I am certain, it would make your Muse smile my dearest , Heidi. Hugs xxx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/18/2020 9:08:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios, I am trying to connect with my muse! I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 6/18/2020 7:03:00 AM
So delightful a poem, Heidi! Loved it from start to finish. I am saving it in my FAVES.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/18/2020 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay! I am thrilled to hear that and the FAV too. I wasn't even sure about it, even though I felt like I found my muse, as writing this. I appreciate you support and you have a brought me a smile today. I hope your day goes well :)
Date: 6/18/2020 2:02:00 AM
Lovely poem Heidi.. Your muse is free and graciously flowing..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/18/2020 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Jenish! I appreciate your comment. It makes me happy to hear that. Have a nice day :)
Date: 6/17/2020 11:33:00 PM
I think you found your muse, before writing this wonderful gem..enjoyed.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/18/2020 8:23:00 AM
Hi Harry. I hadn't had my muse at all and it was really bothering me, so I tried this and felt like I found it in the poem. I am happy you enjoyed this! I hope all is well :)
Date: 6/17/2020 7:58:00 PM
Heidi, you are the inveterate traveler -- and so is your Muse! Lovely poem! Warmest wishes, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/17/2020 8:06:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. Thank you for the smile. I appreciate your kind comment. Take care :)
Date: 6/17/2020 5:34:00 PM
I'm glad you found your muse, I had a similar experience and finally found mine. Hope you're OK Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/17/2020 6:11:00 PM
These are chaotic times with so many issues, it is understandable this would happen with our muse. Thank you for all your support and kind comments Tom. Take care :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/17/2020 6:09:00 PM
My replies weren't going through. I am trying again. I am starting to find muse and wrote this to help find it. I am happy you found yours. Continued...next reply
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/17/2020 6:08:00 PM
Hi

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