Murphy's Law

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Date written: 07/22/2019

certainly not my kind of day disenchantment hovers above a sad heaven about to cry brooding, ominous nimbostratus clouds and trees blot out afternoon sun rays fruitful expectations sprouted... barring a multitude of ripe hopes, yet, unforgiving fire did rage... and reduced them to rubble and ash. a saturnine day even mockingbirds refuse to sing. all was right just yesterday! what happened?

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/14/2020 10:36:00 AM

Congrats on your honors with this fun poem, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/14/2020 2:01:00 PM

Thank you, Line:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/22/2019 12:24:00 PM

Hello Edward I beh, Oh..that Murphy's Law- when that happens everything goes wrong at the same time. But once that is over, things do come out right. have a nice day my friend.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/22/2019 12:43:00 PM

It's always good to hear from you, Darlene:-) I totally echo your sentiments! Have a nice day, too.