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Date written: 07/22/2019

Murphy's Law


        certainly 
not my kind of day
disenchantment 
             hovers above
a sad heaven 
             about to cry
brooding,
      ominous 
nimbostratus clouds
             and trees 
                       blot out
afternoon sun rays
fruitful expectations 
           sprouted...
barring a multitude 
of ripe hopes,
        yet, unforgiving fire 
did rage...
 and reduced them 
to rubble and ash.
            a saturnine day
even mockingbirds 
      refuse to sing.
all was right 
             just yesterday! 
what happened?
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Gauthier Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 10:36 AM
Congrats on your honors with this fun poem, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 2:01 PM
Thank you, Line:-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 12:24 PM
Hello Edward I beh, Oh..that Murphy's Law- when that happens everything goes wrong at the same time. But once that is over, things do come out right. have a nice day my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 12:43 PM
It's always good to hear from you, Darlene:-) I totally echo your sentiments! Have a nice day, too.
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