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Mrs. Dimitri 2009

The lady sits in her black dress Her back to the white washed wall Such a contrast like typed words on a page She tells you her story without a sound Husband gone, died but fourty years before (She will mourn but another fourty more) Children have all deserted, jumped off the island Agriculture has no future for a medical degree Chairs sat empty yet organised around her As if they once had been filled with purpose A smile, the only entrance fee to her hospitality A million wishes granted inside a clear liquid bottle Yamas, Yasas, Na ci calla Sweet oranges she peels to bid you on your way She hopes their golden juices might tempt you back But her heart as dark as her dress knows you won't And so she waits on the next group to empty To find her, discover and applaud her A quaint break from the ancient ruins that slowly devour her

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Date: 1/1/2013 12:04:00 PM
A few years since I was in Greece but you describe an old widow woman so well... I can imagine in my minds eye....Seren
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Date: 9/6/2009 11:00:00 AM
excellent poem--charma
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Date: 8/19/2009 12:51:00 AM
I love this one. One could bring away many interpertations from this. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/1/2009 4:49:00 PM
doh! alas my mistake, although quite funny! Thanks for taking the time to read, ur critique was great.
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Date: 8/1/2009 1:26:00 PM
This is great. Ihere is so much in it. the flow of the poem makes for such ease and i feel that there was a temptation to break it into four-line stanzas. it may have worked on one level but I think the way that you have written it give the piece a powerful effect and makes greater demands on the reader. I found the spelling of 'forty' (fourty) amusing and I guess that it may well have been spelt that way once. But it works well.
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Date: 7/31/2009 1:26:00 PM
=( sad image; old, lonely ladies are such a melancholic manifestation of the spiral =( ...they need to rediscover communication, that's all what's needed C= jojojo nice poem, I really liked the character, is she real? thanks for the experience =D
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