Mr Mouse

Mr. Mouse, Mr. Mouse, What are you doing, In my house? I smell cheese, yummy cheese! I would like some, If you please? One small bite, Would bring delight, Then I will leave, Without a fight. No cheese for you. Just go, get, shoo! You scared my mom, And sister, too. No cheese, in fact, To stay intact, You better run, We have a cat! 4/11/21

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/12/2021 3:34:00 PM

Hello Kim Merryman, the mouse should run because the cat will chase the mouse. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/12/2021 3:47:00 AM

I missed it too. Kudos..we are both on the top 100 list. Head-bonks Panagiota xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/24/2021 12:46:00 AM

Kim forgive me I missed this POTD and such a beautiful Nursery rhyme - Congratulations - I enjoyed it and the child in me read it three time over. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:24:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer! I"m glad you liked it.

Gail Debole

Date: 4/21/2021 9:42:00 AM

Awesome! This is another charming nursery rhyme. Congrats on your win!

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:24:00 PM

Thank you, Gail!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/20/2021 3:55:00 AM

I am back to congratulate you on a fine choice for POTD Kim. Blessings xxoo

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:24:00 PM

Thank you, Connie!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/18/2021 3:04:00 PM

Bravo ~ back with well deserved congrats on your POTD, Kim!

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:23:00 PM

Thank you, Line!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/17/2021 8:05:00 PM

Back with congrats on a big #1 trophy win in the contest, Carol. Such a sweet poem; so deserving. Cheers, Gershon

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:22:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Rob Carmack

Date: 4/17/2021 5:18:00 PM

I have always been partial to rodents so of course I like your nursery rhyme. Congrats on your win.

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:22:00 PM

Thank you, Rob!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/17/2021 4:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win with this adorable poem - how delightful! Love ~ Mala

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:21:00 PM

Thank you, Mala!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/17/2021 3:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, and also on POTD, with this absolute delight, Kim. A marvelous work! :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:21:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/17/2021 12:43:00 PM

Back with congratulations Kim on your 1st place win with “Mr Mouse’ and also poem of the day. Well done! ~ Belle

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:21:00 PM

Thank you, Belle!

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/17/2021 6:35:00 AM

Nice one...Congratulations Kim Merryman on POTD.

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:21:00 PM

Thank you, Arturo!

Joe Sandler

Date: 4/17/2021 1:19:00 AM

It could also be a Ms mouse. Cute clever poem. I catch them on sticky paper and put them in a tank.Go to youtube JSANDLER48. EEEEK a mouse. You will be entertained.

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:20:00 PM

Thank you, Joe!

Carol Mitra

Date: 4/16/2021 11:02:00 PM

Cheesy breezy....Congrats on your win Kim...much love, do take care :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:20:00 PM

Thank you, Carol!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/16/2021 2:01:00 PM

- Back with a congratulations, Kim :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:19:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Eve Roper

Date: 4/16/2021 12:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Kim! Also on POTD very deserved. Singing nursery rhymes and songs to children as young as babies can help develop their language and communication skills from an early age. Come visit me in my blog Nursery Rhyme 4 - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:19:00 PM

Thank you, Eve and thank you for my placement in your contest!

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/16/2021 9:49:00 AM

LOL!!!Kim this is a hoot!! Well done you!! Big congrats on your win!! Big huggs and love my friend!! Deb

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:18:00 PM

Thank you, Deborah!

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/15/2021 10:44:00 AM

What a delightful nursery rhyme, Kim. Your poetic pen spills clever, fun and fantastic ink! I love the quick rhythmic pace of the piece and the rhymes too. Congratulations for receiving the wonderful recognition of POTD. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:17:00 PM

Thank you, Susan!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/13/2021 8:01:00 PM

Congrats on your POTD with this fantastic nursery rhyme!

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:17:00 PM

Thank you, Milton!

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 4/13/2021 7:11:00 PM

This left me chuckling! It’s about time there was something funny on POTD! Congrats!

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:16:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/13/2021 6:59:00 PM

Congrats on POTD!!! God bless you. Love, Gina

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:16:00 PM

Thank you, Regina!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/13/2021 5:14:00 PM

"You better run, we have a cat!" Very clever indeed. One way to get rid of a mouse. :) This is cute. You should print this and frame it. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:15:00 PM

Thank you, Brandy!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/13/2021 5:07:00 PM

Fun and clever, congrats on POTD, Kim~

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:15:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/13/2021 4:23:00 PM

Kim, a sweet poem, congratulations on POTD!

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/25/2021 1:14:00 PM

Thank you, Tania!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/13/2021 2:14:00 PM

A wonderful ending Kim for this delightful nursery rhyme centered squarely in the nursery and rhyme tradition! Flows so beautifully! Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings!

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/13/2021 3:40:00 PM

Thank you, Sam!