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Mr Mouse

Mr. Mouse,
Mr. Mouse,
What are you doing,
In my house?

I smell cheese,
yummy cheese!
I would like some,
If you please?

One small bite,
Would bring delight,
Then I will leave,
Without a fight.

No cheese for you.
Just go, get, shoo!
You scared my mom,
And sister, too.

No cheese, in fact,
To stay intact,
You better run,
We have a cat!

4/11/21

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/12/2021 3:34:00 PM Hello Kim Merryman, the mouse should run because the cat will chase the mouse. Enjoy your evening my friend. Login to Reply

Panagiota Romios Date: 5/12/2021 3:47:00 AM I missed it too. Kudos..we are both on the top 100 list. Head-bonks Panagiota xx Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 4/24/2021 12:46:00 AM Kim forgive me I missed this POTD and such a beautiful Nursery rhyme - Congratulations - I enjoyed it and the child in me read it three time over. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:24:00 PM Thank you, Jennifer! I"m glad you liked it.

Gail Debole Date: 4/21/2021 9:42:00 AM Awesome! This is another charming nursery rhyme. Congrats on your win! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:24:00 PM Thank you, Gail!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 4/20/2021 3:55:00 AM I am back to congratulate you on a fine choice for POTD Kim. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:24:00 PM Thank you, Connie!

Line Gauthier Date: 4/18/2021 3:04:00 PM Bravo ~ back with well deserved congrats on your POTD, Kim! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:23:00 PM Thank you, Line!

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/17/2021 8:05:00 PM Back with congrats on a big #1 trophy win in the contest, Carol. Such a sweet poem; so deserving. Cheers, Gershon Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:22:00 PM Thank you, Gershon!

Rob Carmack Date: 4/17/2021 5:18:00 PM I have always been partial to rodents so of course I like your nursery rhyme. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:22:00 PM Thank you, Rob!

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 4/17/2021 4:31:00 PM Congratulations on your top win with this adorable poem - how delightful! Love ~ Mala Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:21:00 PM Thank you, Mala!

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 4/17/2021 3:43:00 PM Congratulations on your win, and also on POTD, with this absolute delight, Kim. A marvelous work! :) Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:21:00 PM Thank you, Evelyn!

Beryl Edmonds Date: 4/17/2021 12:43:00 PM Back with congratulations Kim on your 1st place win with “Mr Mouse’ and also poem of the day. Well done! ~ Belle Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:21:00 PM Thank you, Belle!

Arturo Michael Date: 4/17/2021 6:35:00 AM Nice one...Congratulations Kim Merryman on POTD. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:21:00 PM Thank you, Arturo!

Joe Sandler Date: 4/17/2021 1:19:00 AM It could also be a Ms mouse. Cute clever poem. I catch them on sticky paper and put them in a tank.Go to youtube JSANDLER48. EEEEK a mouse. You will be entertained. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:20:00 PM Thank you, Joe!

Carol Mitra Date: 4/16/2021 11:02:00 PM Cheesy breezy....Congrats on your win Kim...much love, do take care :) Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:20:00 PM Thank you, Carol!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/16/2021 2:01:00 PM - Back with a congratulations, Kim :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:19:00 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Eve Roper Date: 4/16/2021 12:17:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Kim! Also on POTD very deserved. Singing nursery rhymes and songs to children as young as babies can help develop their language and communication skills from an early age. Come visit me in my blog Nursery Rhyme 4 - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:19:00 PM Thank you, Eve and thank you for my placement in your contest!

Deborah Burch Date: 4/16/2021 9:49:00 AM LOL!!!Kim this is a hoot!! Well done you!! Big congrats on your win!! Big huggs and love my friend!! Deb Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:18:00 PM Thank you, Deborah!

Susan Ashley Date: 4/15/2021 10:44:00 AM What a delightful nursery rhyme, Kim. Your poetic pen spills clever, fun and fantastic ink! I love the quick rhythmic pace of the piece and the rhymes too. Congratulations for receiving the wonderful recognition of POTD. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:17:00 PM Thank you, Susan!

L Milton Hankins Date: 4/13/2021 8:01:00 PM Congrats on your POTD with this fantastic nursery rhyme! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:17:00 PM Thank you, Milton!

Jennifer Fenn Date: 4/13/2021 7:11:00 PM This left me chuckling! It’s about time there was something funny on POTD! Congrats! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:16:00 PM Thank you, Jennifer!

Regina Mcintosh Date: 4/13/2021 6:59:00 PM Congrats on POTD!!! God bless you. Love, Gina Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:16:00 PM Thank you, Regina!

Brandy Nicole Date: 4/13/2021 5:14:00 PM "You better run, we have a cat!" Very clever indeed. One way to get rid of a mouse. :) This is cute. You should print this and frame it. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:15:00 PM Thank you, Brandy!

Michelle Faulkner Date: 4/13/2021 5:07:00 PM Fun and clever, congrats on POTD, Kim~ Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:15:00 PM Thank you, Michelle!

Tania Kitchin Date: 4/13/2021 4:23:00 PM Kim, a sweet poem, congratulations on POTD! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/25/2021 1:14:00 PM Thank you, Tania!

Sam Kauffman Date: 4/13/2021 2:14:00 PM A wonderful ending Kim for this delightful nursery rhyme centered squarely in the nursery and rhyme tradition! Flows so beautifully! Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/13/2021 3:40:00 PM Thank you, Sam!

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