Kim Merryman Poet Rhyme

Mr Mouse

Mr. Mouse,
Mr. Mouse,
What are you doing,
In my house?

I smell cheese,
yummy cheese!
I would like some,
If you please?

One small bite,
Would bring delight,
Then I will leave,
Without a fight.

No cheese for you.
Just go, get, shoo!
You scared my mom,
And sister, too.

No cheese, in fact,
To stay intact,
You better run,
We have a cat!

4/11/21

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Darlene De Beaulieu May 12, 2021 at 3:34 PM Hello Kim Merryman, the mouse should run because the cat will chase the mouse. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Panagiota Romios May 12, 2021 at 3:47 AM I missed it too. Kudos..we are both on the top 100 list. Head-bonks Panagiota xx

Jennifer Proxenos April 24, 2021 at 12:46 AM Kim forgive me I missed this POTD and such a beautiful Nursery rhyme - Congratulations - I enjoyed it and the child in me read it three time over. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:24 PM Thank you, Jennifer! I"m glad you liked it.

Gail Debole April 21, 2021 at 9:42 AM Awesome! This is another charming nursery rhyme. Congrats on your win! Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:24 PM Thank you, Gail!

Connie Marcum Wong April 20, 2021 at 3:55 AM I am back to congratulate you on a fine choice for POTD Kim. Blessings xxoo Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:24 PM Thank you, Connie!

Line Gauthier April 18, 2021 at 3:04 PM Bravo ~ back with well deserved congrats on your POTD, Kim! Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:23 PM Thank you, Line!

Gershon Wolf April 17, 2021 at 8:05 PM Back with congrats on a big #1 trophy win in the contest, Carol. Such a sweet poem; so deserving. Cheers, Gershon Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:22 PM Thank you, Gershon!

Rob Carmack April 17, 2021 at 5:18 PM I have always been partial to rodents so of course I like your nursery rhyme. Congrats on your win. Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:22 PM Thank you, Rob!

Malabika Ray Choudhury April 17, 2021 at 4:31 PM Congratulations on your top win with this adorable poem - how delightful! Love ~ Mala Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:21 PM Thank you, Mala!

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 17, 2021 at 3:43 PM Congratulations on your win, and also on POTD, with this absolute delight, Kim. A marvelous work! :) Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:21 PM Thank you, Evelyn!

Beryl Edmonds April 17, 2021 at 12:43 PM Back with congratulations Kim on your 1st place win with “Mr Mouse’ and also poem of the day. Well done! ~ Belle Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:21 PM Thank you, Belle!

Arturo Michael April 17, 2021 at 6:35 AM Nice one...Congratulations Kim Merryman on POTD. Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:21 PM Thank you, Arturo!

Joe Sandler April 17, 2021 at 1:19 AM It could also be a Ms mouse. Cute clever poem. I catch them on sticky paper and put them in a tank.Go to youtube JSANDLER48. EEEEK a mouse. You will be entertained. Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:20 PM Thank you, Joe!

Carol Mitra April 16, 2021 at 11:02 PM Cheesy breezy....Congrats on your win Kim...much love, do take care :) Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:20 PM Thank you, Carol!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 16, 2021 at 2:01 PM - Back with a congratulations, Kim :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:19 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Eve Roper April 16, 2021 at 12:17 PM Congratulations on your win, Kim! Also on POTD very deserved. Singing nursery rhymes and songs to children as young as babies can help develop their language and communication skills from an early age. Come visit me in my blog Nursery Rhyme 4 - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:19 PM Thank you, Eve and thank you for my placement in your contest!

Deborah Burch April 16, 2021 at 9:49 AM LOL!!!Kim this is a hoot!! Well done you!! Big congrats on your win!! Big huggs and love my friend!! Deb Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:18 PM Thank you, Deborah!

Susan Ashley April 15, 2021 at 10:44 AM What a delightful nursery rhyme, Kim. Your poetic pen spills clever, fun and fantastic ink! I love the quick rhythmic pace of the piece and the rhymes too. Congratulations for receiving the wonderful recognition of POTD. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:17 PM Thank you, Susan!

L Milton Hankins April 13, 2021 at 8:01 PM Congrats on your POTD with this fantastic nursery rhyme! Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:17 PM Thank you, Milton!

Jennifer Fenn April 13, 2021 at 7:11 PM This left me chuckling! It’s about time there was something funny on POTD! Congrats! Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:16 PM Thank you, Jennifer!

Regina Mcintosh April 13, 2021 at 6:59 PM Congrats on POTD!!! God bless you. Love, Gina Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:16 PM Thank you, Regina!

Brandy Nicole April 13, 2021 at 5:14 PM "You better run, we have a cat!" Very clever indeed. One way to get rid of a mouse. :) This is cute. You should print this and frame it. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:15 PM Thank you, Brandy!

Michelle Faulkner April 13, 2021 at 5:07 PM Fun and clever, congrats on POTD, Kim~ Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:15 PM Thank you, Michelle!

Tania Kitchin April 13, 2021 at 4:23 PM Kim, a sweet poem, congratulations on POTD! Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 1:14 PM Thank you, Tania!

Sam Kauffman April 13, 2021 at 2:14 PM A wonderful ending Kim for this delightful nursery rhyme centered squarely in the nursery and rhyme tradition! Flows so beautifully! Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings! Kim Merryman April 13, 2021 at 3:40 PM Thank you, Sam!

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