Moving With Spontaneity



~ As early nightfall tousles my hair prism light, the alchemy of a ceremonial parade begins in this panel of a forest like a mystic scene ~ fondling my skin…jutting from nowhere, a relay of tigers and flamingos swivel on glowing shafts in the pale dark ... I freeze. Some quick time frames away, the jungle rises with raw stirrings of wildlife; an explosion ~ from a world curving a zebra's flowing movement of unrehearsed art, of twilight spontaneity ~ oh so blind to human, mental gazes; they slide away from such calculated moments as .~ my body enters their changing symmetry collapsing in mindless trance that nothing from my eyes is ever hidden, not even the low gushing in my breath… I shut my lids to memorize the anatomy of their kind faces, those rising limbs simply estranged from rehearsed gaiety. And I seize their impressions defying the seeming ~ cramps of man’s robotic strides; yet, i cannot hold them inside this head’s waves ~ of memory , consumed with the grace displayed by creatures’ unbridled rites to its gods… I become the humble slave of divine beasts. `~ ~ ~ ~`` *from my journal about a night safari in Singapore for Debbie Guzzi's Etcetera by nette onclaud
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Merryman Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 2:58 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 11:58 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Et cetera" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 6:48 PM
I love your painterly spiritual touch! Congrad's Light & Love
A   Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 12:49 PM
NETTE, nice verse for Debbie's, contest.. Congratulations~always*PD
Mannan Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 7:58 AM
So beautiful Nette. Many congrats dear friend for this win. Thanks for my placement in your contest. After a long time I felt like writing poetry again.
Prabhu Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 12:36 AM
differently potrayed and intresting as usual.congrats on the placement Nette..........~sashi
Johnson Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 8:03 PM
This is great Nette. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Arowolo Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 6:14 PM
Wonderful piece of poetry.I love your presentation,Nette.Oh!,this is scientific and informative....Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...Kudos to you,Friend...
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 4:04 PM
Nette, hurry and do that one you said would be too short. I bet it will be great. Mine is too long. Someone even implied to me that it was too long. I am finally going to get off here. Maybe I can get the start of a suntan today!!!
Horsman Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 6:30 AM
Done that in Singapore, nette, could feel your emotions in every word, awesome. harry
Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 11:39 PM
wow, that was just a journal entry??? You must be writing gorgeous imagery everywhere, Nette!!!
Poet Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 9:29 PM
I am sending you a soupmail.
Poet Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 9:23 PM
This is mysteriously beautiful Nette.Sometimes you seems to be from another planet.This one goes to my Favs!
Loving Iii Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 7:43 PM
animals, they know the way to go. have you ever seen a gay lion? of course not and the day you do be sure to let us know.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 7:03 PM
mysterious and intriguing and so beautiful Nette luv.. u always amaze me with creative power luv.. thanjxx so much for my win.. this was a delightful escapade for a contest luv.. oh..
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 3:55 PM
Reads like an exciting time in your life..Glad that you journaled so that we could read..Very expressive work..Thanks for stopping by..The Kimo that you read is not my entry into the contest..Sara
Andresen Avatar
March 8, 2012 at 3:41 PM
Enjoy your night safari nette, and flamingos swivel.... -oxox love Anne-Lise
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