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Moving On

in the heat of my mares i wake to the scream of my voice sheets drenched in the torment of my thoughts lay eyes wide open in the hours of my sleep overwhelmed by recent events i struggle with the haunting of their potential outcome feel trapped in the exaggeration of an emotional out pour i forget its feel when it is gone i remember its feed when it is here dry to the air of the night i shrivel like a plum under light exist in the blaring inferno of right now the time has come i'm moving on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/12/2015 5:31:00 PM
Armand, saw you over at Jan's poem so I knew you were here and just wanted to say hello before I go off for the day!! Maybe will come back late tonight with a new post. HOpe you are having a good day. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/30/2015 9:24:00 PM
This is such an emotive one, sweet friend. it is a poem of yours I did not see yet. I was searching quite a while tonight. I may finally have seen all your poems and I ended here with this amazing poem. FAVE on this one. Miss you and can't wait to see all the poetry you will bring with you when you return. Please don't be gone long.....
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Date: 9/11/2014 12:21:00 PM
Hold on good soul... you are not alone, very nice poem !
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Date: 9/7/2014 10:15:00 AM
You draw a very clear picture carefully choosing words. I like it, I can see and feel each verse :)
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Date: 9/7/2014 10:11:00 AM
Let go of the reigns and march on...Look for another wild stallion to tame....cheers
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Date: 9/7/2014 4:30:00 AM
Its not easy Maurice but we all need to try and move on from events in the past - we may never forget them but they should not be allowed to overshadow our lives - I have learned a great deal from seeing how negative things in mums past are destroying her - she won't let go - she has many blessings but the past takes over bless her:-( Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/7/2014 1:10:00 AM
Moving on by the force of your own will is a victory! You have prepared the reader beautifully and in a sane way! Very well written and the content is great! Thank you, dear Maurice!
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Date: 9/7/2014 12:05:00 AM
It's always good to move on... let the past go when it tortures you. I have definitely moved on from past pain. Prayers for you ... Love, Gina
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/7/2014 12:39:00 AM
Thank you. You are so supportive. God Bless.

Book: Shattered Sighs