Moving Mountains

My prayer is clamorous, “Let this cup pass.”
somewhat pious, a smidgen of brass.
God's Word relates how mountains were moved,
waters turned back and shackles removed.

Thus so I make my request to heaven
“Lord, the strain is twenty-four, seven.
“Lord, I can’t think in this eternal noise.
“The mess, the stress, I confess, it annoys."

My simple prayer, "If there's another way,
some stroke of luck; take me out of this fray.
God, move my mountain, can you make it flee?"
Quietly His answer came; the mountain is me.

He moved my cup to a much better place -
And filled it full with salvation’s grace.
His grace - sufficient for any event.
my arrogance - feeble excuse to vent.

July 10, 2022

Sponsor	Edward Ibeh
Contest Name	Pick-A-Title, Vol 31
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ibeh Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 12:51 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this fabulous poem, Reason:-) Loved it!
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July 31, 2022 at 6:47 PM
Thank you, Edward, I appreciate your support and encouraging remark accompanying a winning placement in your contest. Have a great first week of August.
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July 31, 2022 at 9:47 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful "write. I love your ending. Have a great/blessed day.......................
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August 1, 2022 at 8:59 PM
Thanks, Paula, so glad to hear your friendly comments often. It means a lot.
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