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Moves, Oh So Futile

he played the smooth sounds she danced to his sultry tunes but left with his mate

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/1/2010 3:09:00 PM

Hey Wilma, hierdie Senryu lyk so waar en gebeur vir my heel dikwels in die verlede! Geniet die lees! Wees versigtig ... Gert:!)

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 9/30/2010 3:45:00 PM

i think he fancied his mate more and must have been a man too. lol love it girl. I'm sad now. your fault. you have to cheer me up

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/30/2010 2:12:00 PM

Nice senryu, sad end though...love Michael

James Fraser

Date: 9/30/2010 2:10:00 PM

I wonder how many times this has happened, a so out there society Senyru Wilma. I hope you have had a terrific week >> James

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/30/2010 12:41:00 AM

poor lad, sounds like me, oh only kidding, Aussie is fine Wilma, lots of rain in the east nothing here in the west, plus water restrictions now, the w.a. government havejust posted an eight hundred million dollar surplus for the month of august, there is no depression here, but the government greed is just as prevalent here as anywhere else. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2010 4:47:00 PM

Ahhh, poor matie!! Good one, Wilma. LUv, Andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 9/29/2010 2:23:00 PM

All sort of intrigue here. A real tongue-in-cheek. Love, Dave

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/29/2010 10:40:00 AM

Ah, another example of deception, Wilma. Very interesting statement about men who flirt with others when they have wives of their own. Know a couple like that and have little respect for them. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/29/2010 8:24:00 AM

Very humorous write but quite touching, Wilma

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/29/2010 8:00:00 AM

enjoyed reading.. your slow moves flow like time--a good time!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/29/2010 7:32:00 AM

Interesting write..Leaves some questions here....I was honored to have you drop by and comment on my work...Sara