Movements of Beginnings

written on time’s page
                                                        with finite syllables of dust
                                                  he spelled my heritage
                                           from earth to sky
                                     along an umbilical line of faith 

                                 we fluttered from the lips of fingers
                           fully form for purpose
                       written on an invisible calculus
                that bring monarchs where birth mark lingers
            and salmons somersaulting sluice and streams
      turtles, penguins, and herons white wings
netted in design with nested tabula rasa  mind 

I have an argument
   against the beginning begotten from a bang 
      before atom or element
         I have an argument against force and natural laws
             at work without mass or embodiment
                 for embryonic gravity or forces weak or strong
                    I have an argument
                        that the singularity could not become more than fragment
                           of energy again if a single atom explode 
                              its forces flocking away from fusion
                                 for energy fission to explode

                                  a theory 
                         flimsy as spiders web
                  dethroning my majesty gulped 
          in primeval slime unlinked history from love
  minimizing the particular time of our becoming on ships 
that met the stagnant eyes of swampy thoughts … shuddering 
                                    in vain
                     the whip cracks louder than pain -
             and on our black blistered backs … crumbling 
soils in desertification threw some syllables skywards for mercy
                               starvation winds with sickle clouds of rain  
                                 they lie again ... leaving us without inheritance
                                    for all our labors, lost, and grievance
                                      what bang can buck the strain 
                                          and bring us broken souls to glory again?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Eggins Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 2:39 AM
Wonderful write ... and now one of my favourites
Al-Riyami Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 9:27 AM
Omgaz this is one of the peices I RealsLove.You have the wickedest Structures and flows ive read.Keep it up!
Docherty Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 7:05 AM
A poem that is easily read and understood, and yet it hold so much teaching and so much muse within... Your writing powerfully evokes emotion from your reader repeatedly as ever, and I look forward to retruning to read piece after piece. Might I thank you for your encouraging words and thoughts on my writing, humbled. Kindest thoughts as ever, Anna-Marie.
Williams Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 6:57 AM
Incredible ! springs to mind... bravo L'nass bravo !
La France Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 5:57 PM
I love the style and the journey of the poem, really wonderful..
Gumbo Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 8:03 AM
Again, I can't tell you how much I appreciate that you take time to comment on my writing. I am so inspired by you and love to read your work also. Messages are deep, writing is brilliant and shows the intellectual artist, scientist, Peaceful Sage. Thoughtful Man. Many hugs ... I'm away to read more of your works!
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May 23, 2009 at 5:42 PM
We are making progress but the movement is so slow that generations pass. They taught us in school but they did not teach us acceptance and showed history with rose colored glasses. Keep writing. Vince
Devonshire Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 9:34 AM
The intensity and message in this poem are amazing, Shango! And as always, you give us so much to think about. Love, Carolyn
Megens Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 12:31 PM
I AM BLESSED TO HAVE SOMEONE OF YOUR TALENT COMMENT ON MY POEMS WE ARE DEFITYNITLY DIFFERENT IN STYLE BUT YOU INSPIRE ME GREATLY THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS IM HONORED
Orozco Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 10:34 AM
Wow! You are truly talented master! I am honored that you would lay your eye upon my humble work! I thank you sire, greatful I truly am! God bless, eduardo
Higgins Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 9:47 AM
Shango, thanks for your comments..now I need a dictionary to help me navigate through the wisdom that you have left me with..much respect from the most high place to a writer whom I admire from afar....one love.
Townsend Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 7:42 AM
You are such an amazingly gifted writer! Well done. Smiles from Lolita
P. Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 4:52 AM
wow ... you sure know how to work my brain!! the vision of this write ... is truly wonderful and interesting!! 'a theory flimsy as spider web' ... so much truth in one line!! bravO L'nass!!! ~ Arany
Eggins Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 11:09 AM
What a wonderful write and a very open mind ... I think you should call me friend I find you have me hooked as well lol beautiful work ... thank you so much for all the wonderful comments you left me you make me blush .. Love Jayne :)
Loveless Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 7:19 AM
Beautiful. Amazing. Interesteting. An Open MIND Is A Beautifrul Thing. Great Job. And Thank You For The Comments. Peace <3 BooBoo
Devonshire Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 7:05 AM
Very interesting how you examine the beginning of life and pose "arguments" to scientific explanations. The way the slaves were treated is discraceful. Indeed, they were left "without inheritance." I like to think times are finally changing but that last verse is amazing. Great poem (as always from you)! Love, Carolyn
Strand Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 12:45 AM
One for my favourites L'nass,the presentation is awesome as are your very valued comments yesterday of my poetry.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Reynolds Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 5:01 PM
You my dear, are out of this world. thank goodness for like-mindedness. I feel at home in your poetry. amazing. love, Kristin
Nutter Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 11:48 AM
Simply amazed at the talent you possess and your creativity. Blessings to you and TY for your comments on Support From Above
Rhinem Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 6:26 PM
....In purple linen~From the story "Christ" told, in The Book of Luke~Smile~That shall be their eternity, in Abrahams bossom...."I Love You~And, I Always Will~'You' Are My Favorite Writer!!!":):)~So, "Beautiful Poem~Straight From Your Beautiful Soul~'My Love Always To You & Your Loves, Forever, John!!!"~"Have A Very Glorious Day My Friend!!!":):) Bye ~
Rhinem Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 6:21 PM
Smile~"I Love This Beautiful Write!!!":):)~"Hello My Blessed & Beautiful Brother L'nass~I Hope That 'You Your Loved Ones' Are Doing Perfectly!!!?":):)~I love "Your" layout here also~Yet, what kept and always does cross my mind as I read this and before....That without the hope of "Paradise," all of these beautiful lives born into saddened circumstance~Will never see, what "God Has Always Meant For them To Have!!!":):)~But, I know that they shall~Like the story of Lazurus and the rich man-cont-
Megens Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 4:34 PM
you move us with words and all you write you are anatural talent and from my favorite place on earth keep writing one love
Rider Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 10:33 AM
Your form and style are amazing. The poem is a masterpiece, thought provoking, artistic, compelling. Well done L'nass! ~Trudy~
Richards Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 3:35 PM
I don't know how you do this day after day...each work is a masterpiece...of talent, of a deep spiritual core, this too, has so much to absorb, with such intellegence, and thought. You are a poet's poet, L'nass...I'm again in awe of your skill. No matter what one believes....you make us question and think...and that is a true teacher, your gift. ~ Carrie
Chircop Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 1:01 PM
MOVEMENTS OF BEGGININGS--i have the argument against all bangs too,i believe God created us and no scientist will ever make me believe otherwise,and i love the last four verses,no inheritance for the labourers-leading to hunger lost people and broken souls,conscience test her for those who luxury is on above,you will see glory,you will my master of poetry---and i love the movements carved here-my friend
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