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Mourning... - Tanka

heaven is heavy with the tears of angels shed for falling stars... pain's knocking at heavens' gates asking for its toll of salt...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/8/2010 9:35:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Liliana. Have a beautiful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:37:00 PM
The tears/salt reference is very clever..good work .I havent read your work before..if this is any indication you are very talented. BG
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