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Mountainside

The wind blew strong gusts of cold air As I walked with the sunshine on me I thought of being in your arms, so warm Cyclones of leaves blew across the street My mind spun into a reverie I kept walking to see what color The distant mountain is today Around the corner it was there A mixture of orange and brown glowing With clouds like cotton in deep blue sky A plane in the distance flew by It wasn’t going to heaven so I must stay To finish all I can do in each day I will mix the colors on the palette And bring the mountainside to view With hopes you see the beauty too Heidi Sands

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/5/2016 12:01:00 AM
Through your words, I can see their beauty too. A lovely poem Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/5/2016 6:26:00 AM
I am happy you can see this beautiful sight nearby. I like when I can share it with others. Thank you!
Date: 11/4/2016 3:47:00 PM
Definitely a scenic beauty, you painted with luscious broad strokes Heidi. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2016 3:53:00 PM
Thank you, I am happy to hear that ! :)
Date: 11/4/2016 3:45:00 PM
A beautiful patelle of colours. Great imagery. I love it.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2016 3:52:00 PM
Thank you Darren :)
Date: 11/4/2016 3:01:00 PM
- A beauty, yes it is Heidi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2016 3:30:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciate your comment! :)
Date: 11/4/2016 2:17:00 PM
Who couldn't see the beauty of your visions after reading this wonderfully painted poem. This was like I had been on a brief vacation from the real world of work this afternoon. Absolutely gorgeous Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2016 2:23:00 PM
Thank you Chris! Happy to hear I gave you a little vacation :)

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