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Mountain Prayers { Triple Tetractys }

The Mountains Bring me so Much peace inside I love to go there to talk to my Lord I know a place that is so beautiful Giant Redwoods Majestic Touch the Sky The Silence Broken by A waterfall Crystal clear reflections from up above

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Derrick Burton

Date: 8/2/2008 7:54:00 PM

wow,thats real good I am inspired by this poem got to make it a favorite.

James Foulk

Date: 7/28/2008 8:49:00 AM

Michael this was a very peaceful piece of poetry that read very well. and thank you for reading my silent voices and for your comment

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/24/2008 4:54:00 PM

Wow I would so love to be there. You are so blessed to live near such amazing beauty. The miracles of nature bring us so much closer to our spiritual self. Wonderful poetry form too. Awesome write! Love, Shar

Robyn Blauw

Date: 7/24/2008 1:52:00 PM

I can almost feel Giant Redwoods, and the peace and tranquility found there in your words.....you are a powerful writer Michael. As always,,,,sending you a hug..

Date: 7/24/2008 1:24:00 PM

Wonderful use of this challenging format. This poem has such a peaceful feel to it, fitting for the message. I see you are the top community builder today, a testament to your generous soul. Blessings to you. Keep on writing. Karen

P Sheart

Date: 7/24/2008 12:15:00 PM

Just beautiful Michael. When nature's spiritual embrace become's one with love there is where the heart resides. Love Light Truth Patricia

Angela Crabtree

Date: 7/24/2008 12:00:00 PM

No wonder. You are spiritual, which says it all. I love the imagery in this Tetractys. I like the flow of it, so I am going to make that form my next challenge. Peace, Ivy

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/24/2008 11:39:00 AM

Such a lovely form as this reads with a natural effortless flow to it. The uplifting message is successfully provided through use of superb imagery. Wonderful! Michael