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Motion In Devotion

It was a blissful lovers paradise Moon was ablaze, stars were glistening bright Through ajar window, breeze softly blew in Gently caressing o'er their unclothed skin. Nothing could stop the pairs lovin' feeling Their shadows dancing across the ceiling All of a sudden all hell was let loose Raging wind lifting slates off from the roof. Thunder clapped, the sky turned ebony black The only light came when lightening flashed. Planets went spinning into outer space The frenzy making the whole household shake. Passion grew in extremes of ecstasy Sounds of the storm raising the fantasy Shaken and stirred in heights of emotion Pure displays of motion in devotion. Loving had never been this heavenly Nor left them both gasping so breathlessly Till the turbulent storm calmed down and passed In each other's arms they were tightly wrapped. When peace resumed he whispered in her ear "Did the earth move for you also, my dear" "No, for me 'twas only the bed that moved" "Them dam casters slip-slidin' round the room." 19th October 2020 COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(29) any theme any form Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Stand *

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Date: 10/20/2020 7:18:00 PM
Back with congrats on your #1 win in Brian's always competitive contest! Cheers, Gershon
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/20/2020 9:52:00 PM
Thank you Gershon, it’s fun to participate and a thrill to have a win. Belle
Date: 10/20/2020 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win with your rockin' and rollin' poem, Belle. Very witty ending.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/20/2020 9:33:00 AM
Than you so much Sam, the win was a pure delight. Belle
Date: 10/20/2020 6:42:00 AM
hahaha... sorry but i made me laugh... You write so well, so neatly and such great choice of words that flow so well...
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/20/2020 7:04:00 AM
Don’t be sorry, I’m glad to have given you a laugh. Thank you Silent One. Belle
Date: 10/19/2020 11:44:00 AM
Your poem made me smile with Nostalgia.. Thank you
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/19/2020 11:56:00 AM
Nostalgia does make one smile, sweet memories make life worthwhile. Thank you Vijay, Belle
Date: 10/18/2020 8:15:00 PM
Quite a roller-coaster ride for (me) the reader here, Belle! Wow. I had to hang on tight. Loved it!! G.Luck in Brian's contest! Kudos, Gershon
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/19/2020 1:20:00 AM
Had the desired effect, that’s really good to know. Thanks a bunch Gershon. Belle

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