Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Motifs of Autumn

Twilight crimson in motifs gold
Paints eve’s horizon ruby bold
Where autumnal dreams unfold

As saffron vistas waltz to please
Amethyst winds quiver in breeze
Falling leaves of gamboge trees

Stars up high, for attention vie
Glinting prairies in russet dye
While doting moon peeks from sky

Till sunrise blossoms shortened days
Glistening smile of autumn's blaze
Blushed in kiss of zealous rays

January 21, 2021
Syllables: 8,8,7 per stanza

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Valsa George April 4, 2022 at 4:42 AM "Stars up high, for attention vie Glinting prairies in russet dye While doting moon peeks from sky".....Colorful motifs of autumn ! Excellent write my friend ! This is one of my Faves....

Paul Callus February 13, 2021 at 7:58 AM You deliver this poem in striking imagery draped in colours, Vijay. Excellent. Regards // paul

Judy Ball January 26, 2021 at 7:08 PM This is lovely Vijay. The world around us was created in such beautiful color. The sunrises and sunsets, the colors of the changing seasons, so much beauty. Thanks for sharing. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit January 28, 2021 at 11:52 AM Much appreciate Judy--many thanks.

Joseph May January 26, 2021 at 11:06 AM Beautiful depiction of Autumn Vijay, Well written Vijay Pandit January 28, 2021 at 11:52 AM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2021 at 12:57 PM Was this for a contest that recently was judged with only three winners? If so, you were cheated. This was so incredible. Just back to tell you that. Vijay Pandit January 24, 2021 at 1:59 PM Yes it was--thank you Andrea for your supportive comments. It is what it is!

Alexis Y. January 24, 2021 at 5:46 AM WoW! Vijay, You have composed a fine piece of poetry. Your descriptions are so vivid and bold. The content and imagery were so precise. I found it to be one of the best poems I've seen about Autumn. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit January 24, 2021 at 7:59 AM Delighted by your visit my friend and your charming compliments. Much appreciate your vote of confidence, Alexis. Many many thanks.

Brandy Nicole January 23, 2021 at 9:09 PM "Glistening smile of autumn's blaze, where autumnal dreams unfold" So beautiful and vivid. Your thoughts are filled with many amazing moments. A colorful array in display. This belongs in my favorites. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit January 24, 2021 at 5:27 AM Always a treat to read you cheerful feedback my friend. And so special to receive a FAVE from you. Much appreciate Brandy, your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Michelle Faulkner January 23, 2021 at 10:16 AM Such a beautiful depiction of the autumn's sunset, I think the first stanza is my favorite, should a top winner! Vijay Pandit January 23, 2021 at 3:06 PM Thank you Michelle--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos January 23, 2021 at 5:25 AM VijaY, I have always enjoyed your most profound use of color descriptions in your poems, this one is no exception - too awesome for words, a true inspiration to us soupers! Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Vijay Pandit January 23, 2021 at 6:31 AM Much appreciate your wonderful feedback, Jennifer--many thanks my friend.

Harry Horsman January 22, 2021 at 7:54 PM Love this, Vijay, truly a master stroke with your pen. Vijay Pandit January 23, 2021 at 6:30 AM So very kind of you Harry--much appreciate--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy January 22, 2021 at 7:16 PM Gorgeous poem, vividly detailed, Vijay. Janice Vijay Pandit January 23, 2021 at 6:29 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Akkina Downing January 22, 2021 at 1:52 PM WOW, Vijay, this is magnificent!! Totally a winner for me, I love it! I fave it too :) Vijay Pandit January 22, 2021 at 2:00 PM So very kind of you my friend. A joy to read your feedback and so special to receive a FAVE from you, Akkina. Many thanks.

Angela Crabtree January 22, 2021 at 8:52 AM Your pen paints your words perfectly, Vijay. A wonderful poem that's definitely a winner! :) Vijay Pandit January 22, 2021 at 1:59 PM Thank you Angela--much appreciate.

Linda Alice Fowler January 22, 2021 at 7:24 AM Beautiful entry Vijay! Brilliantly alive with colors and imagery! Linda Vijay Pandit January 22, 2021 at 1:58 PM Much appreciate Linda--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose January 22, 2021 at 4:43 AM Dear Vijay, you most definitely payed attention to detail here, you went far beyond a readers expectation. God bless you keep writing. I promise to keep reading, Vijay Pandit January 22, 2021 at 5:54 AM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Vienna.

Anitha Jayasankar January 22, 2021 at 4:43 AM Wow great imagery in beautiful rhymes. Loved the last stanza. A sure winner for the contest Vijayji. Best wishes. ~ Ani Vijay Pandit January 22, 2021 at 5:53 AM Much appreciate Ani--many thanks.

David Byrne January 21, 2021 at 4:38 PM Charming. Vijay Pandit January 22, 2021 at 5:53 AM Thank you David. Much appreciate.

Constance La France January 21, 2021 at 4:35 PM Vijay, your poem is beautiful and perfect in every way, I hope to see this poem on the winning list _Constance Vijay Pandit January 22, 2021 at 5:52 AM So glad to hear from you, Constance. Much appreciate your kind remarks. many thanks.

Juliet Ligon January 21, 2021 at 12:23 PM Stunning imagery. Vijay Pandit January 21, 2021 at 2:55 PM Thank you for stopping by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate, Juliet.

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2021 at 12:15 PM I love this. It's so beautifully succinct. Vijay Pandit January 21, 2021 at 2:54 PM So special, coming from you Andrea. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Mike Gentile January 21, 2021 at 9:51 AM Your images here are rich and beautiful. I especially love the deep gemstone hues and you have used perfectly here! Good Luck Vijay !! Vijay Pandit January 21, 2021 at 2:53 PM So very kind of you, Mike. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Arturo Michael January 21, 2021 at 9:11 AM You dance the words...and take the lead...I like it. Vijay Pandit January 21, 2021 at 2:52 PM Much appreciate, Arturo--many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar January 21, 2021 at 9:06 AM Superlative poem. Images abound one after the other and the rhyme scheme is not as easy as one thinks. Best for a win. ~~ Vijay Pandit January 21, 2021 at 2:52 PM Much appreciate your kind feedback, Victor--many thanks, as always.

Regina Mcintosh January 21, 2021 at 8:42 AM Love this, dear friend. It's a beautiful poem. God bless you with a win Vijay Pandit January 21, 2021 at 2:50 PM Thank you my friend for your kind remarks--much appreciate, Gina.

Demetrios Trifiatis January 21, 2021 at 7:56 AM A portrait of nature masterfully painted by the brush of your Muse, my dearest friend, Vijay! Good luck! Blessings Vijay Pandit January 21, 2021 at 2:50 PM So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate, Demetrios--many thanks.

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