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Motifs of Autumn

Twilight crimson in motifs gold
Paints eve’s horizon ruby bold
Where autumnal dreams unfold

As saffron vistas waltz to please
Amethyst winds quiver in breeze
Falling leaves of gamboge trees

Stars up high, for attention vie
Glinting prairies in russet dye
While doting moon peeks from sky

Till sunrise blossoms shortened days
Glistening smile of autumn's blaze
Blushed in kiss of zealous rays

January 21, 2021
Syllables: 8,8,7 per stanza

Copyright © Vijay Pandit | Year Posted 2021

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Valsa George Date: 4/4/2022 4:42:00 AM "Stars up high, for attention vie Glinting prairies in russet dye While doting moon peeks from sky".....Colorful motifs of autumn ! Excellent write my friend ! This is one of my Faves.... Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 2/13/2021 7:58:00 AM You deliver this poem in striking imagery draped in colours, Vijay. Excellent. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 1/26/2021 7:08:00 PM This is lovely Vijay. The world around us was created in such beautiful color. The sunrises and sunsets, the colors of the changing seasons, so much beauty. Thanks for sharing. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/28/2021 11:52:00 AM Much appreciate Judy--many thanks.

Joseph May Date: 1/26/2021 11:06:00 AM Beautiful depiction of Autumn Vijay, Well written Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/28/2021 11:52:00 AM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/24/2021 12:57:00 PM Was this for a contest that recently was judged with only three winners? If so, you were cheated. This was so incredible. Just back to tell you that. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/24/2021 1:59:00 PM Yes it was--thank you Andrea for your supportive comments. It is what it is!

Alexis Y. Date: 1/24/2021 5:46:00 AM WoW! Vijay, You have composed a fine piece of poetry. Your descriptions are so vivid and bold. The content and imagery were so precise. I found it to be one of the best poems I've seen about Autumn. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/24/2021 7:59:00 AM Delighted by your visit my friend and your charming compliments. Much appreciate your vote of confidence, Alexis. Many many thanks.

Brandy Nicole Date: 1/23/2021 9:09:00 PM "Glistening smile of autumn's blaze, where autumnal dreams unfold" So beautiful and vivid. Your thoughts are filled with many amazing moments. A colorful array in display. This belongs in my favorites. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/24/2021 5:27:00 AM Always a treat to read you cheerful feedback my friend. And so special to receive a FAVE from you. Much appreciate Brandy, your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Michelle Faulkner Date: 1/23/2021 10:16:00 AM Such a beautiful depiction of the autumn's sunset, I think the first stanza is my favorite, should a top winner! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/23/2021 3:06:00 PM Thank you Michelle--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 1/23/2021 5:25:00 AM VijaY, I have always enjoyed your most profound use of color descriptions in your poems, this one is no exception - too awesome for words, a true inspiration to us soupers! Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/23/2021 6:31:00 AM Much appreciate your wonderful feedback, Jennifer--many thanks my friend.

Harry Horsman Date: 1/22/2021 7:54:00 PM Love this, Vijay, truly a master stroke with your pen. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/23/2021 6:30:00 AM So very kind of you Harry--much appreciate--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy Date: 1/22/2021 7:16:00 PM Gorgeous poem, vividly detailed, Vijay. Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/23/2021 6:29:00 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Akkina Downing Date: 1/22/2021 1:52:00 PM WOW, Vijay, this is magnificent!! Totally a winner for me, I love it! I fave it too :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/22/2021 2:00:00 PM So very kind of you my friend. A joy to read your feedback and so special to receive a FAVE from you, Akkina. Many thanks.

Angela Crabtree Date: 1/22/2021 8:52:00 AM Your pen paints your words perfectly, Vijay. A wonderful poem that's definitely a winner! :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/22/2021 1:59:00 PM Thank you Angela--much appreciate.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/22/2021 7:24:00 AM Beautiful entry Vijay! Brilliantly alive with colors and imagery! Linda Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/22/2021 1:58:00 PM Much appreciate Linda--many thanks.

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 1/22/2021 4:43:00 AM Wow great imagery in beautiful rhymes. Loved the last stanza. A sure winner for the contest Vijayji. Best wishes. ~ Ani Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/22/2021 5:53:00 AM Much appreciate Ani--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/22/2021 4:43:00 AM Dear Vijay, you most definitely payed attention to detail here, you went far beyond a readers expectation. God bless you keep writing. I promise to keep reading, Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/22/2021 5:54:00 AM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Vienna.

David Byrne Date: 1/21/2021 4:38:00 PM Charming. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/22/2021 5:53:00 AM Thank you David. Much appreciate.

Constance La France Date: 1/21/2021 4:35:00 PM Vijay, your poem is beautiful and perfect in every way, I hope to see this poem on the winning list _Constance Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/22/2021 5:52:00 AM So glad to hear from you, Constance. Much appreciate your kind remarks. many thanks.

Juliet Ligon Date: 1/21/2021 12:23:00 PM Stunning imagery. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/21/2021 2:55:00 PM Thank you for stopping by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate, Juliet.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/21/2021 12:15:00 PM I love this. It's so beautifully succinct. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/21/2021 2:54:00 PM So special, coming from you Andrea. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Mike Gentile Date: 1/21/2021 9:51:00 AM Your images here are rich and beautiful. I especially love the deep gemstone hues and you have used perfectly here! Good Luck Vijay !! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/21/2021 2:53:00 PM So very kind of you, Mike. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Arturo Michael Date: 1/21/2021 9:11:00 AM You dance the words...and take the lead...I like it. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/21/2021 2:52:00 PM Much appreciate, Arturo--many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/21/2021 9:06:00 AM Superlative poem. Images abound one after the other and the rhyme scheme is not as easy as one thinks. Best for a win. ~~ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/21/2021 2:52:00 PM Much appreciate your kind feedback, Victor--many thanks, as always.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 1/21/2021 8:42:00 AM Love this, dear friend. It's a beautiful poem. God bless you with a win Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/21/2021 2:50:00 PM Thank you my friend for your kind remarks--much appreciate, Gina.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/21/2021 7:56:00 AM A portrait of nature masterfully painted by the brush of your Muse, my dearest friend, Vijay! Good luck! Blessings Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/21/2021 2:50:00 PM So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate, Demetrios--many thanks.

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