Mother's Nature Tease

The snow has fallen Rain came and melted the snow The green grass appeared

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Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu

Date: 2/8/2019 12:07:00 PM

Good poem with good imagery Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/8/2019 1:04:00 PM

Oh hello Okonkwo, so nice to see you. thank you for a lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Maria Williams

Date: 3/13/2018 12:13:00 AM

Nice haiku Darlene - your visual word picture leave no doubt to the topic. Thanks for sharing...Maria xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/13/2018 12:24:00 PM

Hello Maria, yes you are right. Mother nature is a tease. We will have snow tomorrow. Wonder what the spring day will bring.... have a nice day my friend. xx

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/1/2018 4:41:00 AM

Very good...Simply life...All the best Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/1/2018 9:05:00 AM

Hello Micheal, yes it is simply life. Today it feels like winter. Have a nice day my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/28/2018 4:54:00 PM

Great visual Darlene :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/28/2018 5:24:00 PM

Hello Heidi, thank you for the lovely comment. Have a lovely evening my frioend.