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Mother's Nature Canvas

The snowflakes have spread Across my whole window Melting so slowly Until the images Reveal Before my eyes Shown in so many forms Rightin front of me I see the bottom Of a big ocean Mermaids on the rocks Sea horses gliding by Shipwrecks on the bottom Fish swimming to and fro Enjoying the scenery As they move slowly

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David Lee Herring

Date: 4/13/2018 9:27:00 PM

We don't get much snow (not any actually) here in Florida, but we do have a lot of clouds and storms. This reminds me of looking up at the clouds and letting my mind interpret the story they're telling me. Great poem! I love your imagery. Thanks for sharing it and for being the first to comment on the first poem I submitted on poetry.com Your friend, David

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/14/2018 7:55:00 AM

Hello David,so nice to meet you.Thank you for your lovely comment.I do not think that Florida gets snow.Your welcome I like your poem. I look forward to reading more. Have a nice day my friend.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/27/2018 11:24:00 AM

What a beautiful portrait you have painted of Mother Nature! The imagery is truly entrancing! hugs. Pandita

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/27/2018 2:00:00 PM

Hello Pandita,Thank you for your lovely comment.I hope you haveseen a comment i made on your poetry. I hope you have a nice day my friend.

Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 2/23/2018 4:03:00 AM

Hi Darlene you have observed the nature very closely and described it very beautifully... thanks and have a nice day too...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/23/2018 12:34:00 PM

Hello Muhammad, you know when the ice melts from the window, a scene appears. This is what I saw. Have a nice day my friend.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 2/22/2018 2:13:00 PM

A wonderful scene for sure. You have such a great window.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/22/2018 6:01:00 PM

Hello Alfred, when the ice melts on the frozen, a lot of images appear on the window.The scene I described is what the window showed me. Have a nice evening my friend.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/19/2018 1:55:00 AM

I like this. I reminds me of childhood and reading the clouds. Many wishes, Kai

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/19/2018 9:12:00 AM

Hello Kai Micheal Neumann, niece to meet you. I am so pleased this poem has brought you a memory.I also read clouds. So many shapes are shown. Have a nice dsay my friend.