Mother's Love Is Great

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~Mother's Love Is Great~ (Tanka-Double) Mother's love is great Mother's job never complete Her love is so sweet Mothers for their children pray Do all everyday Mothers for us care All for us they would just dare Their loads so great For their children much they bear They love us so much. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 February.08.2015

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/2/2015 7:18:00 AM

You have a unique way of expressing yourself, I enjoy it.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/2/2015 11:22:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Richard,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!I'm glad you enjoyed it.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/6/2015 7:07:00 PM

Dorian I can only say it must be wonderful to be loved so by your child. Light & Love

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/7/2015 12:08:00 AM

Thank you so very kindly,Debbie,for stopping by and commenting on my mothers day tribute poem.Much heartfelt appreciated, dear friend.Yes it is when they do.Wishing a very lovely day!In His light!God bless you! :) hugs! xxx D.

Julia Ward

Date: 3/24/2015 8:43:00 AM

That is it, exactly... Connie's backtrack was uncalled for as the vast majority of mothers love their offspring. Julia, xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/25/2015 6:35:00 PM

Thank you so very kindly, Julia,for stopping by and commenting on my mothers day tribute poem. Heartfelt appreciated my dear friend! Wishing a very lovely evening!In His light! God bless you! :)D.

Anna Hopper

Date: 3/4/2015 7:54:00 AM

Lovely

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/4/2015 3:53:00 PM

Thank you so kindly again,Anna, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! Wishing a very lovely evening!In His light! God bless you! :)D.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2015 9:23:00 PM

This is the way it should be, but not always the way it is, sadly. I think being a mother is the greatest gift any woman can be given, yet a few of my friends never wanted any children. Everyone is different and has different things to learn in life, but I am sure glad I have children to love. Your poem is lovely Dorian! 7

Julia Ward
Date: 3/24/2015 8:40:00 AM

Most mothers DO love their children, Connie... very few don't.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/14/2015 1:02:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Connie, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! You're always so sweet to me, thanks!:) I wish you a very Happy Valentine Day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "