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Mother's Favorite Flower

Mother said of all the mid-summer flowers she loved best, The common garden dahlia was clearly her favorite. Every Spring she carefully hand-placed the sturdy tubers, Tenderly caring for each one, watched it bravely shoot up, Growing, until large luscious red, orange, and purple blooms Burst forth like the golden globular sun they resembled. Some have noticed strolling through a garden of dahlias Is very much like sorting through large boxes of buttons, * All sizes, shapes, and colors waiting to be selected. Mother saved the bulbs of her favorites from year to year Carefully wintered them over in the damp root cellar, Watching for earliest signs of tender green shoots sprouting. Mother told us after she became seriously ill, To make sure a quilt of dahlias lay over her grave. When she left us at the end of that torturous July For her bier we had a blanket assembled from her beds Of the species of daisies, zinnias, chrysanthemums And, as she requested, several pure-white dahlias. *idea from "dahlias" on Internet FIRST PLACE WINNER Written March 11, 2021 For "Flower-Flowers (Imagery) Contest by Constance La France Each line contains 14 syllables

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Date: 3/16/2021 9:22:00 AM
Milton, congratulation on your win in my Imagism Challenge on the theme of a flower or flowers with your beautifully penned and emotional poem, it truly touched my heart, well done _Constance
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/16/2021 9:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance. I felt really honored by your approval. Really, I did!
Date: 3/15/2021 11:00:00 PM
Milton, congratulations on your 1st place win with this well written and a feeling of warmth. Hugs Eve
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/16/2021 7:30:00 AM
Thanks, Eve. Your thoughts are always well-received. Have a wonderful, productive week!
Date: 3/15/2021 3:12:00 AM
- A beautiful poem ... these flowers will always make you think of your mother, Milton :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/15/2021 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. I appreciate your reading my poem and making a comment.
Date: 3/14/2021 6:39:00 PM
Milton, a wonderful tribute poem with splendid imagery, congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 3/14/2021 7:29:00 PM
Thanks, Tania. I appreciate you.
Date: 3/14/2021 3:26:00 PM
The dahlias do look like "colored" buttons, Milton. I hope your mother was smiling down as you planted the dahlias on her grave. (They do look a bit like chrysanthemums and zinnias.) Congratulations on your top win! Hugs, Carolyn
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/14/2021 3:51:00 PM
Thanks, Carolyn. I think all of those flowers are from the same family...also the sunflower.
Date: 3/14/2021 3:02:00 PM
a beautiful tribute both to your mother but also to the flowers she loved, many congrats on your win Milton, hugs jan xx
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/14/2021 3:19:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. I thoroughly enjoyed writing this poem. Hope you're having a splendid, creative weekend.
Date: 3/13/2021 1:35:00 AM
A lovely tribute to your mother and beautiful dahlias, Milton, wonderful poem:)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/13/2021 9:07:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jo.
Date: 3/12/2021 1:32:00 PM
Dahlias are beautiful and were my grandma's favorite. Beautiful imagery!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/12/2021 2:00:00 PM
Thanks, Juliet, for stopping by. Yes, they are very vibrant.
Date: 3/12/2021 12:47:00 PM
Very nice! Thoroughly enjoyed!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/12/2021 1:04:00 PM
Ah, that makes me so happy. Thanks, Kim.
Date: 3/11/2021 11:05:00 PM
What a marvelous tribute to your gardening mother, and to her precious dahlias! I love this one!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/12/2021 9:56:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. It was always a special, ritual day when Mother planted her dahlia beds.
Date: 3/11/2021 5:16:00 PM
You are such a sweet son. Always remembering how your mother touched your heart. I wish I had one like yours. I am very thankful thou that I got that unconditional love from my Mom, who raised me. Good luck....
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/11/2021 5:27:00 PM
Thanks so much, Marilene. She really was one of a kind. I'm so happy you got that "unconditional love," too.

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