Mother's Favorite Flower

Mother said of all the mid-summer flowers she loved best,
The common garden dahlia was clearly her favorite.
Every Spring she carefully hand-placed the sturdy tubers,
Tenderly caring for each one, watched it bravely shoot up,
Growing, until large luscious red, orange, and purple blooms
Burst forth like the golden globular sun they resembled.

Some have noticed strolling through a garden of dahlias
Is very much like sorting through large boxes of buttons, *
All sizes, shapes, and colors waiting to be selected.
Mother saved the bulbs of her favorites from year to year
Carefully wintered them over in the damp root cellar,
Watching for earliest signs of tender green shoots sprouting.

Mother told us after she became seriously ill,
To make sure a quilt of dahlias lay over her grave.
When she left us at the end of that torturous July
For her bier we had a blanket assembled from her beds
Of the species of daisies, zinnias, chrysanthemums
And, as she requested, several pure-white dahlias.

     *idea from "dahlias" on Internet

FIRST PLACE WINNER
Written March 11, 2021
For "Flower-Flowers (Imagery) Contest
by Constance La France
Each line contains 14 syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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March 16, 2021 at 9:22 AM
Milton, congratulation on your win in my Imagism Challenge on the theme of a flower or flowers with your beautifully penned and emotional poem, it truly touched my heart, well done _Constance
Hankins Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 9:49 AM
Thank you so much, Constance. I felt really honored by your approval. Really, I did!
Roper Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 11:00 PM
Milton, congratulations on your 1st place win with this well written and a feeling of warmth. Hugs Eve
Hankins Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 7:30 AM
Thanks, Eve. Your thoughts are always well-received. Have a wonderful, productive week!
Andresen Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 3:12 AM
- A beautiful poem ... these flowers will always make you think of your mother, Milton :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hankins Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 8:06 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. I appreciate your reading my poem and making a comment.
Kitchin Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 6:39 PM
Milton, a wonderful tribute poem with splendid imagery, congratulations on your first place win!
Hankins Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 7:29 PM
Thanks, Tania. I appreciate you.
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March 14, 2021 at 3:26 PM
The dahlias do look like "colored" buttons, Milton. I hope your mother was smiling down as you planted the dahlias on her grave. (They do look a bit like chrysanthemums and zinnias.) Congratulations on your top win! Hugs, Carolyn
Hankins Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 3:51 PM
Thanks, Carolyn. I think all of those flowers are from the same family...also the sunflower.
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 3:02 PM
a beautiful tribute both to your mother but also to the flowers she loved, many congrats on your win Milton, hugs jan xx
Hankins Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 3:19 PM
Thanks, Jan. I thoroughly enjoyed writing this poem. Hope you're having a splendid, creative weekend.
Daniel Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 1:35 AM
A lovely tribute to your mother and beautiful dahlias, Milton, wonderful poem:)
Hankins Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 9:07 AM
Thanks so much, Jo.
Ligon Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 1:32 PM
Dahlias are beautiful and were my grandma's favorite. Beautiful imagery!
Hankins Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 2:00 PM
Thanks, Juliet, for stopping by. Yes, they are very vibrant.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 12:47 PM
Very nice! Thoroughly enjoyed!
Hankins Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 1:04 PM
Ah, that makes me so happy. Thanks, Kim.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 11:05 PM
What a marvelous tribute to your gardening mother, and to her precious dahlias! I love this one!
Hankins Avatar
March 12, 2021 at 9:56 AM
Thanks, Caren. It was always a special, ritual day when Mother planted her dahlia beds.
Evans Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 5:16 PM
You are such a sweet son. Always remembering how your mother touched your heart. I wish I had one like yours. I am very thankful thou that I got that unconditional love from my Mom, who raised me. Good luck....
Hankins Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 5:27 PM
Thanks so much, Marilene. She really was one of a kind. I'm so happy you got that "unconditional love," too.
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