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Babies hear their Mom's voice from in the womb; forming a bond that will last a lifetime. When a fetus stretches and kicks for room, Mom's voice overrides anxiety's climb; sowing seeds of love that will grow and bloom. When your Mom's beating heart is all you feel; its rhythm pulsating throughout your body. And although her heartbeat seems surreal, It beat calms you, nourishes your body, and keeps your soul tethered to what's real. Mom is love, hope, and trust rolled into one; nurturing, and influencing your life. And a mother's love cannot be outdone, different from that of husband or wife; it is reserved for a daughter or son. Families provide for a baby's needs, fathers give them strength; mothers offer love. And therefore, there's nothing that supersedes a mother's love, for like God up above, her greatest desire is that you succeed. Nothing can prepare you for that feeling of helplessness as you watch your Mom die. Her death's palpable and leaves you reeling, your first impulse is to curl up and cry; such pain requires a lifetime of healing.

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Date: 4/6/2023 3:50:00 PM
What an incredible tribute to mothers and their love that crosses generations. Wonderfully written Emile! Congratulations on your win! Sending you Easter blessings of joy!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/6/2023 4:26:00 PM
Thanks, Sam, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/3/2023 4:50:00 AM
Emile, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/3/2023 8:16:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments and my placement in your contest, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/21/2023 7:08:00 AM
Brought to the front, long hidden tears for my loss. Beautifully written my friend Emile. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/21/2023 8:18:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, I know those tears all too well... I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/21/2023 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations for your first place with this beautiful poem Emile. Best wishes.
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Date: 3/21/2023 8:16:00 AM
Thanks, Wendy, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/19/2023 11:26:00 AM
Hello Emile, I ponder a mother's bond begins when she feels the baby inside her moving around in her. Then when the baby is born the bond becomes stronger. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/20/2023 5:03:00 AM
Hello Emile, Thank you Emile. You have a great day to my friend. Enjoy your day. ---/Darlene/
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/19/2023 1:22:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, have a great day my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/19/2023 11:15:00 AM
- Described so beautifully, Emile ... the feeling when you lose your mother is indescribable ... (the same feeling when losing one's father) ... we don't have them forever - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/19/2023 1:21:00 PM
Thanks, Sunshine, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/19/2023 10:51:00 AM
That is very sweet and poignant, Emile! I try very hard to point out a difference between loves to my new husband as he is kinda jealous of attention I shower my grandchildren with. Perfect entry!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/19/2023 1:19:00 PM
Thanks, Margarita, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

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