Mother of Pearl (Brian Strand's "spaces" Form)

Mother of Pearl From the depths of death Beauty of the soul

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2010 4:30:00 PM

Great write...Sara

Elaine George

Date: 7/26/2010 3:31:00 PM

Incredible Monoku, Jimbo. Thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/25/2010 3:17:00 PM

A wonderful "spaces" write, Jimbo. There is so much that could be placed in the middle line. Am enjoying my vacation. Love, Carolyn

Tirzah Conway

Date: 7/25/2010 12:29:00 PM

Beautifully writen monoku, I enjoyed it!~Tirzah~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/24/2010 6:14:00 PM

I enjoyed this short but sweet Monoku

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/24/2010 12:31:00 PM

The only thing i feel is beauty with the Mother of Pearl. The deepneesof her feeling is brought to life.,,p.d.