Debra L Brown Poet Rhyme

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Mother Nature's Scolding

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                                 Winter and spring had a fight.
                            We had 4 inches of snow late last night.
                       The tulips and daffodils are covered in snow.
                          Cold winds and temperatures above zero.
                      Their dear mother said, "You two better play nice!"
                         "Do not cross me or you'll pay the price."

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Bill Baker April 6, 2022 at 4:34 PM Looks like our front flower bed two weeks ago, Debra. I love the picture and the lovely rhyming poem. Good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs, Bill Debra L Brown April 6, 2022 at 7:39 PM Thank, Bill for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Gordon Mcconnell April 1, 2022 at 1:06 PM Fine piece Debra, good imagery and expression. Blessings, Gordon Debra L Brown April 1, 2022 at 1:27 PM Thanks, Gordon, for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Nancy Kaufman April 1, 2022 at 9:13 AM what a cute write with perfect rhyme. I could see the two seasons battling it out.

Mike Bayles March 31, 2022 at 9:32 PM Nice rhyme, Debra. Debra L Brown April 1, 2022 at 12:44 PM Thank, Mike for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Joseph P. DiMino March 30, 2022 at 4:58 PM See, every mother is not warm and cuddly always, some cold shoulders now and then. Love it! Well done. Debra L Brown April 1, 2022 at 12:49 PM Joe, I enjoyed your comment. Thanks for taking the read the poem. Blessings ~ Debra

Anil Deo March 30, 2022 at 2:03 AM Wonderful, as only Mother Debra could deliver. A FAVE! SHALOM SHALOM IN Jesus who created IT Debra L Brown March 31, 2022 at 10:18 AM Anil, I very humbled you chose this poem as your favorite. Thank you for your kind words. Blessings ~ Debra

Gershon Wolf March 29, 2022 at 5:31 PM Those naughty, naughty seasons! lol. How could they conspire against such pretty flowers...This is such a fun write, Debra. Kudos, Gershon Debra L Brown March 29, 2022 at 6:14 PM Thanks, Gershon, for your comment. Mother Nature certainly has her hands full with her kids. (Lol) Thanks for seeing the humor. Blessings ~ Debra

John Watt March 29, 2022 at 2:48 PM Debra, I love your imagery and the clever thought of winter and spring like fighting siblings with their mother saying "play nice!" Blessings ~ John Debra L Brown March 29, 2022 at 5:14 PM Thanks John, I enjoyed your comment. These days it seems winter and spring needs a time out in the corner (LoL) as were expecting some winter mix in the next day or two. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Tom Cunningham March 29, 2022 at 1:03 PM A tricky time where the seasons meet and engage in a tug of war. Tom Debra L Brown March 29, 2022 at 5:18 PM Thanks, Tom, for your comment. It reminds me of two kids fighting. That's how I came up with the idea for this poem. Have a good evening. Blessings ~ Debra

Rico Leffanta March 29, 2022 at 11:39 AM Much worse when Mother Nature snows on one's parade! Aloha! Debra L Brown March 29, 2022 at 5:23 PM Haha! Mother Nature will take away all their toys and put them in time out. (Lol) Thanks Rico, I enjoyed your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Darlene De Beaulieu March 29, 2022 at 10:45 AM Hello Debra Brown, yes winter and spring are having a fight there was snow on the ground, now melted. I heard we are going to have freezing rain. It is cold outside feels like winter. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu March 30, 2022 at 10:22 AM Hello Debbie, In cold temHugs.ps no flowers can grow. Wewill have to wait for warmer weather. Hugs. Debra L Brown March 29, 2022 at 5:46 PM Hi! Darlene, Thanks for taking the time out to comment. It's cold here to we are expecting some bad weather this week. I'm not sure if my daffodils will live as it was down in the teens last night. Have a nice evening. Blessings ~ Debra

Sotto Poet March 29, 2022 at 7:05 AM Debra, you've written a very sweet piece!  Excellent writing, especially the conflict between spring and winter, and the mother's reconciliation. Debra L Brown March 29, 2022 at 5:52 PM Thank, Sotto for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Victor Buhagiar March 29, 2022 at 2:07 AM Mother knows best. Winter and spring are still at loggerhead. but soon the weather will improve. Debra L Brown March 29, 2022 at 4:44 AM Thanks, Victor, for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Valsa George March 28, 2022 at 9:09 PM A very cute write, Debra ! Probably your mother instinct has made you write this ! Really enjoyed the squabble between spring and winter and the mother's mediation.... Debra L Brown March 29, 2022 at 4:44 AM Thanks, Valsa, for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Heidi Sands March 28, 2022 at 4:53 PM Great one Debra. The seasons are battling here too :) Debra L Brown March 28, 2022 at 5:34 PM Thanks, Heidi, for your words of encouragement. Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues March 28, 2022 at 4:13 PM A little chuckle! Well done! :) Debra L Brown March 28, 2022 at 5:37 PM Thanks, Kim, I'm happy you found the humor. Blessings ~ Debra