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Mother Nature

Mother Nature.. I see a mountain; wake me up there. Tired of dreaming, no time to spare. I will be flying soberly drunk. I am just living, don’t ask me where. There will be some light full of delight. I am tired of darkness and night. I will be drinking, drinking the dew. Thanking the sunshine, shining so bright. I am waiting and waiting to see. Watching your sunset under a tree, Seeking for wisdom, seeking your path, Flying toward you, dancing with glee. I am so lonely, sky is my friend. Talking and smiling, so I pretend. I will be seeing you in my dreams. Waiting and hoping how this will end. Tell me where you are; I am abused. Lots and lots of pain used and misused. Tell me what to do; I am so lost. It is no wonder I am confused. 4/16/2017 Haloo

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Ashok Kumar Mishra

Date: 4/16/2020 11:22:00 PM

Wonderful write

Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/23/2023 2:56:00 PM

thanks...

Al Juman

Date: 7/15/2018 10:27:00 PM

excellent colorful write my friend

Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/16/2018 2:47:00 AM

Thanks Al...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/21/2017 7:18:00 AM

Pashang, your poem is beautiful as it shows your mind :) Lord Jesus Christ is the answer for your troubles:)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/22/2017 3:00:00 AM

Thank you very much my dear. Regarding my salvage, I suggest you read the book "ZEALOT" The Life and Times of Jesus of Nazareth by Dr. Reza Aslan

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/26/2017 11:22:00 AM

A beautiful picture of the Mother Nature drawn with your beautiful pen. Loved always my dear friend, bl

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/26/2017 12:21:00 PM

Thanks my dear friend..

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/25/2017 7:43:00 AM

Pashang, this is beautifully done, and what a great painting to accompany your poem:) Amitiés

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/25/2017 11:17:00 AM

Amitiés, you're so kind..Pashang

Honestly J.T.

Date: 5/16/2017 11:53:00 PM

Nicely Done -JT

Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/18/2017 6:04:00 PM

Thank you JT

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/29/2017 6:11:00 PM

A beautiful written poem Pashang. A 7.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/30/2017 9:29:00 AM

Thanks Dear

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/28/2017 12:27:00 AM

So deep feelings exhibited so well ... The light rhythm never comes in the way of feeling the emotion ... Loved the poem ...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/28/2017 3:21:00 AM

Thanks, the feeling comes and goes, my confusion is forever. ...

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 4/27/2017 10:39:00 PM

So unique and fits so well with the painting, great individualistic expression, enjoyed Pashang! God bless:-)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/28/2017 3:23:00 AM

Thanks Keith. ..

Akkina Downing

Date: 4/27/2017 8:17:00 PM

Wowee, Pashang! Definitely my fave. This is a master for sure. I'm just in awe, both painting and poem are absolutely beautiful. I love it :)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/28/2017 3:25:00 AM

Thanks Akkina, you are so kind.

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/27/2017 6:58:00 PM

Wow. This one is very well stitched together with style and deep feelings brought together by your poetic soul. Emile.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/28/2017 3:27:00 AM

Thanks Emile, thank for coming back and reading my work.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/26/2017 12:19:00 AM

Excellent and well crafted tribute to mother nature. Nice pic. Thanks for sharing it.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/26/2017 2:20:00 PM

Thanks Ravi. ..

Eve Roper

Date: 4/25/2017 9:32:00 PM

Very well done, Pashang, and thank you for the compliment.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/26/2017 2:20:00 PM

Thanks Eve you're always very kind to me

Jean Murray

Date: 4/23/2017 4:10:00 PM

You play music too? I would love to hear you. She is abused, poor thing.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/25/2017 9:06:00 PM

I do a lot of things.... haha

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/18/2017 9:07:00 PM

Pashang...between your artwork and your poem...you have outdone yourself! Your sense of creativity shines in this poem and I am so impressed with your painting! A 10 if it were possible, and a Fave! Aloha, Connie ; )

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/19/2017 1:37:00 AM

My dear friend, you're so kind. One day I may play my music for you as well....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2017 6:31:00 PM

I sure do enjoy seeing your artwork WITH your other expression of talent, the poetry. Also good to see a rubaiyat. It is one of those forms I have not done many of and was thinking of it just the other day!!

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/19/2017 1:36:00 AM

You are great with ghazal, I'm sure you'll fine with rubai. In a rubai each piece is complete in itself. let me know when you are ready....

Paul Callus

Date: 4/18/2017 1:55:00 PM

The emotional confused thoughts of an abused Mother Nature. Where do we go from here!! I like the use of this form and the topic you ably treat, Pashang...and your fresh-looking painting. // paul

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/18/2017 2:25:00 PM

Thanks Paul... you're always very kind to me

Niall Fulham

Date: 4/18/2017 11:36:00 AM

Hi Pashang , I love your style great poem rate 7 :)) I will have to read a few more of your work thanks,

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/18/2017 1:27:00 PM

absolutely..... thanks

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/17/2017 1:17:00 AM

I love the rubaiyat form. The content of your poem is also lovely...as is your painting. I enjoyed the read, Pashang

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/17/2017 7:28:00 PM

Thanks Eileen, I am competing with Omar Khayyam and Leonardo .... LOL

Constance La France

Date: 4/16/2017 6:35:00 PM

Pashang, I love the painting and your poem is excellent. Well done.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/17/2017 7:26:00 PM

Thank you my dear...

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon

Date: 4/16/2017 5:33:00 PM

Beautifully crafted tribute to mother nature. I love the imagery created herein.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/17/2017 7:26:00 PM

Thank you sir, you're too kind.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/16/2017 3:54:00 PM

very deep and dark imagery Pashang and the final lines i found intensely sad:-( the colours of the picture are stunning especially the blue and I love the butterflies and mountains bring a sense of freedom:-) hugs Jan xx

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/16/2017 4:09:00 PM

Thanks Jan for reading my painting....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/16/2017 3:05:00 PM

- Is this your own painting, Pashang ? - A deep and touching poems ... distressed and seeking answers ... no wonder, you are confused ... a big world can be lonely - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/16/2017 4:10:00 PM

Thanking the sunshine, shining so bright.