Pashang Salehi Poet Rubaiyat

Mother Nature

Mother Nature..

I see a mountain; wake me up there.
Tired of dreaming, no time to spare.
I will be flying soberly drunk.
I am just living, don’t ask me where.

There will be some light full of delight.
I am tired of darkness and night.
I will be drinking, drinking the dew.
Thanking the sunshine, shining so bright.

I am waiting and waiting to see.
Watching your sunset under a tree,
Seeking for wisdom, seeking your path,
Flying toward you, dancing with glee.

I am so lonely, the sky is my friend.
Talking and smiling, so I pretend.
I will be seeing you in my dreams.
Waiting and hoping how this will end.

Tell me where you are; I am abused.
Lots and lots of pain used and misused. 
Tell me what to do; I am so lost.
It is no wonder I am confused.


4/16/2017    Haloo

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Ashok Kumar Mishra April 16, 2020 at 11:22 PM Wonderful write Pashang Salehi September 23, 2023 at 2:56 PM thanks...

Al Juman July 15, 2018 at 10:27 PM excellent colorful write my friend Pashang Salehi July 16, 2018 at 2:47 AM Thanks Al...

Joanna Daniel June 21, 2017 at 7:18 AM Pashang, your poem is beautiful as it shows your mind :) Lord Jesus Christ is the answer for your troubles:) Pashang Salehi June 22, 2017 at 3:00 AM Thank you very much my dear. Regarding my salvage, I suggest you read the book "ZEALOT" The Life and Times of Jesus of Nazareth by Dr. Reza Aslan

Bl Devnath May 26, 2017 at 11:22 AM A beautiful picture of the Mother Nature drawn with your beautiful pen. Loved always my dear friend, bl Pashang Salehi May 26, 2017 at 12:21 PM Thanks my dear friend..

Anne-Marie Coreggia May 25, 2017 at 7:43 AM Pashang, this is beautifully done, and what a great painting to accompany your poem:) Amitiés Pashang Salehi May 25, 2017 at 11:17 AM Amitiés, you're so kind..Pashang

Honestly J.T. May 16, 2017 at 11:53 PM Nicely Done -JT Pashang Salehi May 18, 2017 at 6:04 PM Thank you JT

Darlene De Beaulieu April 29, 2017 at 6:11 PM A beautiful written poem Pashang. A 7. Pashang Salehi April 30, 2017 at 9:29 AM Thanks Dear

Probir Gupta April 28, 2017 at 12:27 AM So deep feelings exhibited so well ... The light rhythm never comes in the way of feeling the emotion ... Loved the poem ... Pashang Salehi April 28, 2017 at 3:21 AM Thanks, the feeling comes and goes, my confusion is forever. ...

Keith O.J. Hunt April 27, 2017 at 10:39 PM So unique and fits so well with the painting, great individualistic expression, enjoyed Pashang! God bless:-) Pashang Salehi April 28, 2017 at 3:23 AM Thanks Keith. ..

Akkina Downing April 27, 2017 at 8:17 PM Wowee, Pashang! Definitely my fave. This is a master for sure. I'm just in awe, both painting and poem are absolutely beautiful. I love it :) Pashang Salehi April 28, 2017 at 3:25 AM Thanks Akkina, you are so kind.

Emile Pinet April 27, 2017 at 6:58 PM Wow. This one is very well stitched together with style and deep feelings brought together by your poetic soul. Emile. Pashang Salehi April 28, 2017 at 3:27 AM Thanks Emile, thank for coming back and reading my work.

Ravi Sathasivam April 26, 2017 at 12:19 AM Excellent and well crafted tribute to mother nature. Nice pic. Thanks for sharing it. Pashang Salehi April 26, 2017 at 2:20 PM Thanks Ravi. ..

Eve Roper April 25, 2017 at 9:32 PM Very well done, Pashang, and thank you for the compliment. Pashang Salehi April 26, 2017 at 2:20 PM Thanks Eve you're always very kind to me

Jean Murray April 23, 2017 at 4:10 PM You play music too? I would love to hear you. She is abused, poor thing. Pashang Salehi April 25, 2017 at 9:06 PM I do a lot of things.... haha

Connie Marcum Wong April 18, 2017 at 9:07 PM Pashang...between your artwork and your poem...you have outdone yourself! Your sense of creativity shines in this poem and I am so impressed with your painting! A 10 if it were possible, and a Fave! Aloha, Connie ; ) Pashang Salehi April 19, 2017 at 1:37 AM My dear friend, you're so kind. One day I may play my music for you as well....

Andrea Dietrich April 18, 2017 at 6:31 PM I sure do enjoy seeing your artwork WITH your other expression of talent, the poetry. Also good to see a rubaiyat. It is one of those forms I have not done many of and was thinking of it just the other day!! Pashang Salehi April 19, 2017 at 1:36 AM You are great with ghazal, I'm sure you'll fine with rubai. In a rubai each piece is complete in itself. let me know when you are ready....

Paul Callus April 18, 2017 at 1:55 PM The emotional confused thoughts of an abused Mother Nature. Where do we go from here!! I like the use of this form and the topic you ably treat, Pashang...and your fresh-looking painting. // paul Pashang Salehi April 18, 2017 at 2:25 PM Thanks Paul... you're always very kind to me

Eileen Manassian April 17, 2017 at 1:17 AM I love the rubaiyat form. The content of your poem is also lovely...as is your painting. I enjoyed the read, Pashang Pashang Salehi April 17, 2017 at 7:28 PM Thanks Eileen, I am competing with Omar Khayyam and Leonardo .... LOL

Constance La France April 16, 2017 at 6:35 PM Pashang, I love the painting and your poem is excellent. Well done. Pashang Salehi April 17, 2017 at 7:26 PM Thank you my dear...

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon April 16, 2017 at 5:33 PM Beautifully crafted tribute to mother nature. I love the imagery created herein. Pashang Salehi April 17, 2017 at 7:26 PM Thank you sir, you're too kind.

Jan Allison April 16, 2017 at 3:54 PM very deep and dark imagery Pashang and the final lines i found intensely sad:-( the colours of the picture are stunning especially the blue and I love the butterflies and mountains bring a sense of freedom:-) hugs Jan xx Pashang Salehi April 16, 2017 at 4:09 PM Thanks Jan for reading my painting....

Anne-Lise Andresen April 16, 2017 at 3:05 PM - Is this your own painting, Pashang ? - A deep and touching poems ... distressed and seeking answers ... no wonder, you are confused ... a big world can be lonely - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Pashang Salehi April 16, 2017 at 4:10 PM Thanking the sunshine, shining so bright.