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                  Mother Nature..

I see a mountain, wake me up there.
Tired of dreaming, no time to spare.
I will be flying soberly drunk.
I am just living, don’t ask me where.

There will be some light full of delight.
I am tired of darkness and night.
I will be drinking, drinking the dew.
Thanking the sunshine, shining so bright.

I am waiting and waiting to see.
Watching your sunset under a tree,
Seeking for wisdom, seeking your path,
Flying toward you, dancing with glee.

I am so lonely, sky is my friend.
Talking and smiling, so I pretend.
I will be seeing, you in my dreams.
Waiting and hoping how this will end.

Tell me where you are, I am abused.
Lots and lots of pain used and misused. 
Tell me what to do, I am so lost.
It is no wonder, I am confused.


4/16/2017    Haloo

* I named the painting " Mother Nature". It is acrylic on canvas.
I removed the painting so I can put a new one...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/15/2018 10:27:00 PM
excellent colorful write my friend
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/16/2018 2:47:00 AM
Thanks Al...
Date: 6/21/2017 7:18:00 AM
Pashang, your poem is beautiful as it shows your mind :) Lord Jesus Christ is the answer for your troubles:)
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Date: 6/22/2017 3:00:00 AM
Thank you very much my dear. Regarding my salvage, I suggest you read the book "ZEALOT" The Life and Times of Jesus of Nazareth by Dr. Reza Aslan
Date: 5/26/2017 11:22:00 AM
A beautiful picture of the Mother Nature drawn with your beautiful pen. Loved always my dear friend, bl
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Date: 5/26/2017 12:21:00 PM
Thanks my dear friend..
Date: 5/25/2017 7:43:00 AM
Pashang, this is beautifully done, and what a great painting to accompany your poem:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/25/2017 11:17:00 AM
Amitiés, you're so kind..Pashang
Date: 5/16/2017 11:53:00 PM
Nicely Done -JT
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Date: 5/18/2017 6:04:00 PM
Thank you JT
Date: 4/29/2017 6:11:00 PM
A beautiful written poem Pashang. A 7.
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Date: 4/30/2017 9:29:00 AM
Thanks Dear
Date: 4/28/2017 12:27:00 AM
So deep feelings exhibited so well ... The light rhythm never comes in the way of feeling the emotion ... Loved the poem ...
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Date: 4/28/2017 3:21:00 AM
Thanks, the feeling comes and goes, my confusion is forever. ...
Date: 4/27/2017 10:39:00 PM
So unique and fits so well with the painting, great individualistic expression, enjoyed Pashang! God bless:-)
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Date: 4/28/2017 3:23:00 AM
Thanks Keith. ..
Date: 4/27/2017 8:17:00 PM
Wowee, Pashang! Definitely my fave. This is a master for sure. I'm just in awe, both painting and poem are absolutely beautiful. I love it :)
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Date: 4/28/2017 3:25:00 AM
Thanks Akkina, you are so kind.
Date: 4/27/2017 6:58:00 PM
Wow. This one is very well stitched together with style and deep feelings brought together by your poetic soul. Emile.
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Date: 4/28/2017 3:27:00 AM
Thanks Emile, thank for coming back and reading my work.
Date: 4/26/2017 5:55:00 AM
Pashang, a very striking painting and fascinating poetry, regards, g
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Date: 4/26/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thank you George
Date: 4/26/2017 12:19:00 AM
Excellent and well crafted tribute to mother nature. Nice pic. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 4/26/2017 2:20:00 PM
Thanks Ravi. ..
Date: 4/25/2017 9:32:00 PM
Very well done, Pashang, and thank you for the compliment.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/26/2017 2:20:00 PM
Thanks Eve you're always very kind to me
Date: 4/23/2017 4:10:00 PM
You play music too? I would love to hear you. She is abused, poor thing.
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Date: 4/25/2017 9:06:00 PM
I do a lot of things.... haha
Date: 4/18/2017 9:07:00 PM
Pashang...between your artwork and your poem...you have outdone yourself! Your sense of creativity shines in this poem and I am so impressed with your painting! A 10 if it were possible, and a Fave! Aloha, Connie ; )
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Date: 4/19/2017 1:37:00 AM
My dear friend, you're so kind. One day I may play my music for you as well....
Date: 4/18/2017 6:31:00 PM
I sure do enjoy seeing your artwork WITH your other expression of talent, the poetry. Also good to see a rubaiyat. It is one of those forms I have not done many of and was thinking of it just the other day!!
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Date: 4/19/2017 1:36:00 AM
You are great with ghazal, I'm sure you'll fine with rubai. In a rubai each piece is complete in itself. let me know when you are ready....
Date: 4/18/2017 1:55:00 PM
The emotional confused thoughts of an abused Mother Nature. Where do we go from here!! I like the use of this form and the topic you ably treat, Pashang...and your fresh-looking painting. // paul
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Date: 4/18/2017 2:25:00 PM
Thanks Paul... you're always very kind to me
Date: 4/18/2017 11:36:00 AM
Hi Pashang , I love your style great poem rate 7 :)) I will have to read a few more of your work thanks,
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Date: 4/18/2017 1:27:00 PM
absolutely..... thanks
Date: 4/17/2017 1:17:00 AM
I love the rubaiyat form. The content of your poem is also lovely...as is your painting. I enjoyed the read, Pashang
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Date: 4/17/2017 7:28:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, I am competing with Omar Khayyam and Leonardo .... LOL
Date: 4/16/2017 6:35:00 PM
Pashang, I love the painting and your poem is excellent. Well done.
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Date: 4/17/2017 7:26:00 PM
Thank you my dear...
Date: 4/16/2017 5:33:00 PM
Beautifully crafted tribute to mother nature. I love the imagery created herein.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/17/2017 7:26:00 PM
Thank you sir, you're too kind.
Date: 4/16/2017 3:54:00 PM
very deep and dark imagery Pashang and the final lines i found intensely sad:-( the colours of the picture are stunning especially the blue and I love the butterflies and mountains bring a sense of freedom:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/16/2017 4:09:00 PM
Thanks Jan for reading my painting....
Date: 4/16/2017 3:05:00 PM
- Is this your own painting, Pashang ? - A deep and touching poems ... distressed and seeking answers ... no wonder, you are confused ... a big world can be lonely - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/16/2017 4:10:00 PM
Thanking the sunshine, shining so bright.