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Carpe Diem

Mother Grimm

Mother loves her darling, infant girl. 
Mother must protect her from such a callous world. 
In a world full of heart break and pain we must count the cost. 
Plus each day is just another day lost. 
Mother tenderly snapped babies growing bones, 
Pared them down and set them, under ripped skin, sewn. 
I must save my sweet baby from ever growing up!
From being taken from me and eventually into a coffin, shut! 
Time went along, as time likely does…
One more day gone, then a year just…was!
Darling baby girl in bonnet and bibb, 
Inevitably began to grow and get big. 
Tiny red spots played across her once clear face…
hair began to grow…in the strangest place!
Mother went to work, no slacker she, 
A Plucking, cutting, shaping, stitching spree.
“ I won't allow time to take you away, 
I won't let my baby suffer”, she'd say. 
Infant girl was not permitted to speak. 
Submitting to tortuous administrations, humble and meek.
However, babies are permitted to scream.
And the girl did plenty of that, crying streams. 
Mother finished, swaddled baby in gauze,
She nursed and burped her, happily thinking of her good cause. 
“Now, it's time to sleep, so I will read to you again. 
How about our favorite? Cinderella, by the Brothers Grimm.”
Mother continued to smile, proud she was doing her part. 
“Mother's do what must be done…much easier, when you have no heart. “
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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La France Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 2:55 PM
Crystol, intense, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, well done, Constance
Woods Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 9:33 PM
Thanks for another wonderful contest! Xo
Toney Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 10:26 AM
Hi, Crystol. Wow! You’ve created Carpe Matrem (Seize the Mother), a hybrid form of Carpe Diem.;) Congratulations on your placement!
Toney Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 12:50 PM
I understand and applaud your imagination.
Woods Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 11:28 AM
Lol...I guess so! The info said poems about life, death, time...I got to thinking how much I want to stop time or go back cause I miss my baby girl... and yea... YIKES! :0 TYSM for stopping by Mark! Xo
Diderot Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 4:58 AM
I wonder, sometimes I truly do. It's a dark world, irrespective of the Light one looks for constantly in all corners. Grimm, men. Mothers: Madeleine Soto/Mother.
Woods Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Needs
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June 15, 2024 at 10:08 AM
Light battles dark, kindness battles cruelty, there is a balance one definitely need for perspective. Thx for stopping in!
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