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Mom, I can’t compare you With Sun, moon or stars Because I didn’t touch it Mom, I can’t compare you With any God Because I didn’t see them Mom, I can’t compare you With any colors Because I can’t make it Mom, I can't compare you With hell and heaven Because I didn't see it Mom, I can't compare you With the nature Because nature also take revenge Some people tell Your heart like a sky Your love like an ocean But I tell You are like soils Where we are rooted Without soil we can’t imagine life We are rooted in soil You just you; my mom We can’t compare anything with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/12/2015 10:25:00 AM
Congrats on your win Bipul. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Date: 3/7/2015 11:57:00 AM
- Welcome to P Soup, with your first poem Bipul - Always nice to meet new "poets" - I look forward to more write from you in the future - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Bipul Alite Gonsalves
Date: 3/7/2015 1:26:00 PM
Thank you very much @ Anne-Lise
Date: 3/6/2015 3:09:00 AM
BIPUL, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Bipul Alite Gonsalves
Date: 3/6/2015 9:59:00 AM
Hey Linda, Thank you very much. It’s nice having an inspiring message from you. English is my second language. I am learning and just started writing in English. So need your moral support and encouragements. Bipul

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