Mother

My mother Gave me life, Is my life Senryu for Mom

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Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 5/9/2011 1:22:00 AM

Many congrats Jack for coveted big win in Francine's contest with imagination at its best in this one. Was away hence bit late in wishing/responding. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2011 1:14:00 PM

Creative win..Congrats..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/4/2011 1:51:00 PM

Congrats Jack on your victory!!!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2011 12:41:00 PM

Congratulations Jack on your win in Francine's contest "Senryu For Mother". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 5/4/2011 11:58:00 AM

Jack, Great to see you in the top five. Congratulations on your succes with this honored presentation. Agape, Moses

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/4/2011 11:55:00 AM

Hey Jack, congratulations on your win in Francine's contest :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2011 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2011 11:31:00 PM

This was one of my personal favorites early on. Glad to see it high in the contest. Congratulations.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/3/2011 10:52:00 PM

cheers for the high win, jack... stunning in a few words.:) huggs, nette

Kash Poet

Date: 5/3/2011 10:39:00 PM

Many congrats Jack-kash

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/3/2011 9:07:00 PM

Congrats jack on your big win in Francine's contest about Mom... a great entry luv and special piece to enjoy with a win..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/3/2011 8:52:00 PM

Brief but powerful Jack. Many warm congrats for this win.

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/3/2011 5:38:00 PM

short and sweet , congrats on your fourth place win in the contest

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/29/2011 4:13:00 PM

Respect for life and respect for your mother. Awesome, Jack. I am poetry-stalkin u today, aren;t I? ha ha. Good stuff. Enjoying your work. Might need to print my Unhealthy Meal poem and tape to your dashboard when McD's are near by-it will ward off evil cravings for grease! ha ha

Robb A. Kopp

Date: 4/27/2011 9:43:00 AM

This is going to be a tough contest...Another great piece

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/26/2011 9:25:00 PM

so honest and pure; love it, jack.. winning wishes! :) huggs, nette

James Foulk

Date: 4/26/2011 1:38:00 PM

a wonderful Senryu telling your love for your mother. beautiful read.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/26/2011 1:06:00 PM

Hope your Mom sees this. She will be so pleased. Thank you for your always kind comments. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2011 11:50:00 AM

a lovely way to say it, really love this one, good luck on the contest Jack,..p.d.

Kash Poet

Date: 4/26/2011 7:55:00 AM

You have told so much with these few words jack.Excellent.Best wishes--kash

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/26/2011 7:04:00 AM

I agree.....this is one of the most powerful senryus I have read....wow! Well done!!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/26/2011 6:51:00 AM

You're not one of those 45 year old men living in his mother's basement are you? Just kidding! This is short and sweet. Good luck in the contest!

Elaine George

Date: 4/25/2011 7:13:00 PM

I agree with Andrea, Jack. Profound and powerful. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2011 3:40:00 PM

this is just one short one, but the most powerful one I think I saw today. LOVE it. wish my son felt this strongly about ME.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2011 2:24:00 PM

Good one..I am sure that she will enjoy reading this one..You need to use that notebook and jot down those ideas and then the magic of writing a great work will come from those sentences, words, or phrases that come to you at the strangest times...Thanks for stopping by..Sara