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Mama, I always loved and respected you.

Our bond was close, but it got stronger; 

The moment I became a mother too. I

Had no clue how much it would change 

Everything; I just hope that I can 

Raise them following your fine example.

 

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Mama, I always loved and respected you. Our bond was close, but it got stronger; The moment I became a mother too. Had no clue how much it would change Everything; I just hope that I can Raise them following your fine example. 09/16 /2021 Contest: " M" New Poems Only Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 9/24/2021 11:09:00 AM
A lovely and tender tribute to your mom Alexis. I really like the acrostic format. It was amazing to me how much wiser I became after our children had children. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/22/2021 2:41:00 PM
Alexis, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this wonderful poem, splendid writing, I like your poem with the word Mama, instead of mother ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/20/2021 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful "Mother" Acrostic write. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 9/19/2021 11:40:00 PM
Such a beautiful write, Alexis. Hugs, Marilene.
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Date: 9/19/2021 11:00:00 AM
Sweet tribute poem, Alexis. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 9/19/2021 1:42:00 AM
Yeah, our mothers are our true inspiration:) great poem, Alexis:)
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Date: 9/18/2021 11:41:00 AM
Well done. An excellent Mother's Day poem. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/18/2021 7:37:00 AM
Fully agree with you. We always want to be like our mothers but never come close enough. Have a wonderful weekend friend
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Date: 9/17/2021 8:06:00 AM
I agree that we as women want to rear our children to a fine standard that most of the time was set by our mothers. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 9/17/2021 7:32:00 AM
Awwwthis is sweet and a great choice for the letter M. You chose some great words here..
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Date: 9/17/2021 6:04:00 AM
Great tribute to honor your mother, Alexis. All the best.
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Date: 9/17/2021 1:36:00 AM
fine tribute, to a mother. Hugs.
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Date: 9/16/2021 10:00:00 PM
Indeed, a beautiful tribute in acrostic form. Great!
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Date: 9/16/2021 6:52:00 PM
A lovely tribute to your mother in an Acrostic poem Alexis, I’m sure you’re a wonderful mother too… Belle
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