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Mortal Adonis

with the strength of gentleness her love so overpowering-he fell © Harry J Horsman 2018

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/15/2018 10:33:00 AM

Back with most deserved congrats for your win, Harry.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/7/2018 10:22:00 AM

Thanks for your visit mate. Poetry has eluded me of late. It's nice to see that you are not suffering the same curse. Great words, worthy win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/4/2018 10:07:00 AM

I see you are a winner, why am I not surprised...xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/3/2018 4:14:00 PM

It is hard not 'to fall' for the beauty, charms and love of females, Harry! Congratulations for such a worthy winner! Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/3/2018 3:03:00 PM

A "gentle strength" is pretty much how I picture you, Harry. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2018 8:07:00 PM

Glad to be seeing this one again as I peruse all the winners. Congrats, dear friend.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/2/2018 3:54:00 PM

A whole Myth in a Monoku! Genuinely impressive! Congratulations Harry. Stay blessed.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/2/2018 10:35:00 AM

wow, big cheers on your placement, harry.. i forgot to enter in this contest.. huggs

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/2/2018 1:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement!

Charles Messina

Date: 6/1/2018 3:37:00 PM

Great one liner Harry, Congrats on your win my friend !

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/1/2018 3:05:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Harry :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/1/2018 6:18:00 AM

Back with congrats Harry--a great win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2018 6:03:00 AM

- Congratulations with your one line, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 6/1/2018 5:21:00 AM

now that is some powerful love... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/31/2018 1:17:00 PM

You WOWED me with this amazing monoku! Wow, Wow, Wow! Pandita

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/31/2018 8:43:00 AM

Now that’s a powerful line. I love this one! Good luck in the contest Harry.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/30/2018 11:03:00 PM

now , that's what i call a breakaway ending, harry... whoot!..huggs

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/30/2018 10:43:00 PM

(((WOW))) factor here...great one Harry...love and light...^WW^

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/30/2018 8:15:00 PM

Harry, your monoku is not only beautiful but it is deep, stirring and WOW worthy! Tender emotions expressed so powerfully. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/30/2018 7:44:00 PM

Gentle thoughts from a gentle soul:) Well said, harry.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/30/2018 7:33:00 PM

Beautifully written Harry!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2018 6:18:00 PM

Now this is truly profound, just as he requested!! WELL DONE, sir!! And thanks so much for what you commented on my poem. I truly appreciate it.

Elaine George

Date: 5/30/2018 4:41:00 PM

Profound and powerful Monoku, dear Harry.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/30/2018 4:26:00 PM

Great context to your one liner--well done Harry. Best for a win.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/30/2018 4:12:00 PM

It can certainly knock you for six, great monoku Harry, good luck. Tom.