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Moronic Express

There once was a good hubby named Nick, on his wife, he tried to play a trick- Hot wax on the table, was willing and able, but sick wifey came down with a tick. So he dumped out the wax in the sink, was so frustrated he just didn’t think- Wax jammed the disposal, then dropped his bifocal, he couldn’t see so all he did was wink. Wifey’s sore bum then started to swell, with one eye closed shut, Nick just couldn’t tell- So he got real clever, pulled disposal lever, hand got caught on his bum and he fell! Now the happy couple was a mess, still didn’t love each other any less- Tick on wifey’s hurt bum, hubby drowned in some rum, welcome to the moronic express! Syllable count: 9-9-6-6-9 Limerick Contest June 6, 2017

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Date: 6/12/2017 2:50:00 PM
Hello Laura. I hope this day finds you well. This was a definite feel good and playful entry. I love the title. Everything else followed. You took the Limerick and went the extra mile. Well done entirely. Enjoy the night.
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Date: 6/12/2017 11:06:00 AM
a good string of limericks Congrats LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/11/2017 8:03:00 PM
I can see you had a lot of fun with this one, Laura. Congrats on the winners' list. Great job!
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Date: 6/6/2017 5:39:00 PM
That last line just tops the whole read, Laura! You have obviously put a lot of effort into these! Let's hope you win! Best of luck
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Date: 6/6/2017 9:49:00 PM
thank you White Wolf :)

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