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Mornng Rain and Storm

The gentle patter of morning rain against the window, is like a cat’s padded paw tapping to come in. The spell of sleep is too seductive and I roll over and fall into a dark crevice of dreams that burst into a frenzied fury of bats – fragmented and incoherent surreal permutations of my long and varied life’s experiences. Meanwhile, the cat has become an angry lion, but I am too far below to hear his growls. Awake, the cat is gone. I can’t recall my dream and have no recollection of the lion’s threatening presence. I see only paw prints of large puddles filled with images of scattering clouds and hear only weak distant roars.

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Date: 3/16/2024 10:46:00 AM
what a wonderfully descriptive poem Maurice, I absolutely adore the imagery of the gentle rain like a cat's padded paw waiting to come in and then turning ferocious like an angry lion as the storm intensifies and then abates - the final stanza is a joy and finishes the poem to perfection:-) into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/7/2024 10:54:00 AM
Hello Maurice, This was a dream? it must of fwlt very real to you. We do not always remember our dreams. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 3/6/2024 8:21:00 PM
Great!
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Maurice Rigoler
Date: 3/6/2024 8:27:00 PM
Thanks for the stop by, Kim. Happy to hear from you. / Maurice

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