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Mornings To Me

Mornings to me are not an exiting crescent moon glowing gold in the west, preparing to retire below a distant tree line silhouette Scattered footprints in the glistening dew on a lush lawn still dreaming of the day before Cantaloupe skies tickling a sleepy horizon, restless in vivid ribbons on a wide eyed sapphire canvas Yawning morning glories climbing a silent fencepost, standing guard in the shadows of a stately oak Butterflies floating on dawn’s cool breeze quietly touching each blossom in mosaic laced flight patterns The enchanting coo of a stirring mourning dove spreading its wings amidst woven branched tapestries Mornings to me are always you, surrendered in first blush beauty, a breath of every sunrise’s promise, awakening all that my heart desires Good morning Soupers
I posted this earlier in the week but took it down. Here goes round 2. : )

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Date: 10/13/2018 6:59:00 PM
A masterful work of art Chris...going straight into my Faves! I love your ability to see what others miss. This is simply gorgeous! Bravo! xxoo
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Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2018 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Connie for all of the kindness you show me always. Your nice words make me smile this morning
Date: 10/12/2018 6:00:00 PM
This poem stands out. A perfect morning , as if looking at a painting, with all the detail, combined with the ending. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2018 8:27:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi for everything. I appreciate you
Date: 10/12/2018 5:24:00 PM
Your words enchant today Chris .
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Chris Green
Date: 10/12/2018 5:38:00 PM
Thanks Pixie Dust. I am happy it touched you that way.
Date: 10/12/2018 5:24:00 PM
To share ones morning's are a great way to start the day. They give insight in to a peaceful calm. You painted such a nice picture. Thank you for putting it back up.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/12/2018 5:38:00 PM
Thank you so very much Bette for you wonderful comment
Date: 10/12/2018 2:00:00 PM
Breathtaking, beautiful, romantic, so so so beautiful, descriptive, you paint such a vivid picture. Did I mention this is beautiful? Chris, I've read some of the comments below, and I just want to say that sometimes, people read a poem and are just so in awe that words won't do justice to what they feel. Well that's the way it is with me anyway. I find myself at a loss for words, and find myself repeating "beautiful" many times. But even when I gush, it is sincere. I've missed your poems.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/12/2018 2:22:00 PM
Thanks so much Becca, I am thrilled you liked this one and I guess by your comments you think this one is beautiful? :) Thank you my friend, I understand what you are saying and will keep that in mind the next time my cursor is hovering around the delete tab. : )
Date: 10/12/2018 12:16:00 PM
Why would you EVER take it down. It's quite breathtaking. I never expected that romantic sweet ending. Wow. The imagery enthralls, but you are right! Nothing compares to the beauty of love.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/12/2018 12:28:00 PM
Thank you so very much Eileen for your kind and uplifting comments. I appreciate your visit today. Why take it down? It's just me, I am kind of weird like that. Thanks again.
Date: 10/12/2018 10:40:00 AM
Thank you for reposting. Beauty, beautiful and as glowing as the finest sunrise. After I read you, I always pause that I may remember to breathe. (that's as good as a WOW in the WOWjar.) All the best ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 10/12/2018 11:37:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting my friend. Your words are always so nice and I appreciate you so much.
Date: 10/12/2018 10:19:00 AM
Chris, nothing you write should ever be taken down. I'm delighted that you posted it again or I would've missed these beautiful words. Sunrise and early morning is my favorite time of day when the world is bathed in the dew of fresh hope,
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Chris Green
Date: 10/12/2018 11:36:00 AM
Thanks so much Lin. For one thing, I get a lot of views. I don't know why but I do. And when I have a lot of views and no comments I figure that people don't like the poem so I take it down. The reason I reposted this one was someone wrote to me and asked me why I took it down and would I please repost it. So I did. Thanks again Lin, I really appreciate your kindness to me always.
Date: 10/12/2018 8:43:00 AM
Good morning my friend :) Why did you take this one down earlier? I like it a lot.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/12/2018 10:40:00 AM
Chris: That means I should take most of my poems down. I even have people 'follow' me who obviously read, decided to follow, but never commented. I know that I know I know I don't understand. CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 10/12/2018 8:50:00 AM
You know me...a bunch of views, no comments so I took it down to post another day. : ) Thanks my friend, it is so nice to see you around here again.
Date: 10/12/2018 8:28:00 AM
Your poetry always a soothing sight for opening sleepy sand encrusted eyes. Good morning super souper! xomo
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Chris Green
Date: 10/12/2018 8:49:00 AM
Good morning Maureen. : ) Thanks so much my friend.

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