Mornings At the Lake

Brandon is a curious child
His mother observed him and smiled
with pride and doting affection
as he gazed at his reflection.

From the first moment he would wake
he'd ask, "Can we go to the lake?"
She couldn't bear to tell him, "No,"
so to the shore, off they would go.

Croaking frogs made Brandon giggle
and swimming tadpoles that wiggle.
Beneath cottonwoods on the banks
She prayed to God, giving Him thanks.

They shared laughter and fish stories
He picked for her, morning glories
and when his eyes began to close,
She held her son in sweet repose.

Precious memories of these days
would shine brightly as a fire's blaze
Her heart would e'er fondly recall
These enchanted moments of Fall.


October 4, 2021
rhyme me rhyme me Contest
Picture #3 checked with RZ
Sponsored by Eve Roper
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Jones Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 7:51 AM
Congrats on your win!
Daniel Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 10:24 PM
Brilliant poem depicting the love between a mother and her son, Jenna, congratulations:)
Logan Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 8:35 AM
Thanks so much, Jo.
Roper Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 8:12 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jenna, I really fell in love with this. Your verse was very moving. Hugs Eve
Logan Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 7:07 AM
Many thanks for being honored, Eve.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 1:27 AM
You captured the picture very well. Best for a win.
Logan Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 5:57 AM
Thanks so very much, Victor.
Roper Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 6:25 PM
I love :)
Logan Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 7:04 PM
You made me smile, Eve. Thank you.
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 2:31 PM
What a wonderful lighthearted and filled with fun poem. You have captured the feeling of the image nicely. Best wishes in the contest
Logan Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Thank you. I put myself in the scene to look through the mother’s eyes.
Hankins Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 12:31 PM
Aw, this is so precious, Jenna. Well, I guess I should withdraw my effort because it doesn't hold a candle to this. I enjoyed reading it. "Enchanted moments," indeed.
Logan Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 7:02 PM
Such supportive comments you’ve given me. Thank you.
Allison Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 10:52 AM
aww such a charming poem it goes so beautifully with the image, well written rhyme Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Thanks, Jan. There were lots of poems written, based on Eve's other two images, but I was drawn to this little guy.
Cunningham Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 10:35 AM
You captured the scene well Jenna, a delightful tale of a mother taking her child to see the wonders of nature at first hand. Good luck. Tom the painter.lol Tom
Logan Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 10:18 AM
So you're giving wifey a whole new kitchen. Now you'll be expecting some wonderful meals! lol I'm sure she takes good care of you, as you do her.
Cunningham Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 11:47 AM
I'm nearly at the end now, just a bit of touching up here and there, kitchen men coming Wednesday to fit cupboards and then it's feet up time. Hadn't thought of that, thanks for the inspiration. Watch this space. Tom the tired one lol
Logan Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Tom the painter, thank you for enjoying Brandon's tale. Are you still painting? Tile floors and painted walls...there's a poem in there somewhere.
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