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Mornings At the Lake

Brandon is a curious child His mother observed him and smiled with pride and doting affection as he gazed at his reflection. From the first moment he would wake he'd ask, "Can we go to the lake?" She couldn't bear to tell him, "No," so to the shore, off they would go. Croaking frogs made Brandon giggle and swimming tadpoles that wiggle. Beneath cottonwoods on the banks She prayed to God, giving Him thanks. They shared laughter and fish stories He picked for her, morning glories and when his eyes began to close, She held her son in sweet repose. Precious memories of these days would shine brightly as a fire's blaze Her heart would e'er fondly recall These enchanted moments of Fall. October 4, 2021 rhyme me rhyme me Contest Picture #3 checked with RZ Sponsored by Eve Roper

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Date: 10/10/2021 7:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/6/2021 10:24:00 PM
Brilliant poem depicting the love between a mother and her son, Jenna, congratulations:)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/8/2021 8:35:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jo.
Date: 10/5/2021 8:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jenna, I really fell in love with this. Your verse was very moving. Hugs Eve
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/6/2021 7:07:00 AM
Many thanks for being honored, Eve.
Date: 10/5/2021 1:27:00 AM
You captured the picture very well. Best for a win.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/5/2021 5:57:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Victor.
Date: 10/4/2021 6:25:00 PM
I love :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/4/2021 7:04:00 PM
You made me smile, Eve. Thank you.
Date: 10/4/2021 2:31:00 PM
What a wonderful lighthearted and filled with fun poem. You have captured the feeling of the image nicely. Best wishes in the contest
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/4/2021 7:04:00 PM
Thank you. I put myself in the scene to look through the mother’s eyes.
Date: 10/4/2021 12:31:00 PM
Aw, this is so precious, Jenna. Well, I guess I should withdraw my effort because it doesn't hold a candle to this. I enjoyed reading it. "Enchanted moments," indeed.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/4/2021 7:02:00 PM
Such supportive comments you’ve given me. Thank you.
Date: 10/4/2021 10:52:00 AM
aww such a charming poem it goes so beautifully with the image, well written rhyme Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/4/2021 11:18:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. There were lots of poems written, based on Eve's other two images, but I was drawn to this little guy.
Date: 10/4/2021 10:35:00 AM
You captured the scene well Jenna, a delightful tale of a mother taking her child to see the wonders of nature at first hand. Good luck. Tom the painter.lol Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/5/2021 10:18:00 AM
So you're giving wifey a whole new kitchen. Now you'll be expecting some wonderful meals! lol I'm sure she takes good care of you, as you do her.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/4/2021 11:47:00 AM
I'm nearly at the end now, just a bit of touching up here and there, kitchen men coming Wednesday to fit cupboards and then it's feet up time. Hadn't thought of that, thanks for the inspiration. Watch this space. Tom the tired one lol
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/4/2021 11:17:00 AM
Tom the painter, thank you for enjoying Brandon's tale. Are you still painting? Tile floors and painted walls...there's a poem in there somewhere.

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