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Morning Stroll

Morning dew, a gentle breeze, so fresh and airy... nonetheless, my hairs stood up, my senses wary, with images my mind could not seem to bury, strolling among the dead in the cemetery. ---------- Another Awit, 12 syllable monorhyme of 4 lines

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Date: 2/22/2023 11:37:00 AM
Jeff my apologies that has been entirely too long since I dropped by and read some of your work. I am a huge fan of monorhyme some of my older pieces and definitely some of my more recent ones focus on it. I find this to be spectacular in how you've written it looking forward to flipping through a few more of your pages. Wishing you the best A.S.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/22/2023 12:49:00 PM
Thanks for the read and encouragement!
Date: 2/19/2023 3:16:00 PM
how do you keep "Awit" about you in such circumstances....?
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/19/2023 4:37:00 PM
View it as an undertaking?

Book: Shattered Sighs