Morning Run

Thrum. Thrum. Thrum.
Out for a morning run.

I pass the open market
and see old man Crockett,
his cheeks work-worn scarlet.

Thrum. Thrum. Thrum.
Out for a morning run.

Max the cat, sits, blinking
at his world through twinkling
light. What is he thinking?

Thrum. Thrum. Thrum.
Out for a morning run.

A dancing bay otter
churns the bright water,
playing teeter totter. 

Thrum. Thrum. Thrum.
Out for a morning run.

Suddenly I spot her
Rose, fisherman’s daughter,
My warm cheeks burn hotter.

Thrum. Thrum. Thrum.
Out for a morning run.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 1/22/2023 9:01:00 PM
As we run early in the morning, so many such cute scenes greet our eyes. The rhythm and alliterative effect render a musical effect to the poem. Congratulations Linda.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/23/2023 6:20:00 AM
I appreciate your thoughtful comments Valsa! Thanks! :)
Date: 1/22/2023 7:08:00 AM
The echo of your early morning walk may be heard, Linda. This piece of writing is fantastic! Congratulations on your win
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/22/2023 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad! :)
Date: 1/1/2021 9:59:00 AM
Sound of your morning run resonates, Linda. This write is excellent!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/1/2021 3:39:00 PM
Ah, many thanks my friend, and so many thanks for your supportive comments. :) Linda
Date: 12/31/2020 2:13:00 AM
Cute poem Linda. Too old for running now. Hope you'll have a Happy New Year. ~~
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/31/2020 5:46:00 AM
Hi Victor. I never really enjoyed running. And I don't see many who are smiling as they run. ;) I hope your new year is filled with love and joy, Linda
Date: 12/30/2020 7:45:00 PM
Hi-diddle-dee, Thrum-Thrum. I'm out for a morning ski!... Seriously, loved the content and the rhythm, Linda. ~ Snowbird Sam (my middle name)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/31/2020 5:42:00 AM
Blanketed up there, eh SS? Those pesky snow storms! Thanks for the read and comment Gershon. :) Linda
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