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Morning Mystic

Morning Mystic Mysticism is not for me, I know that wind is blowing free, Nor does it speak engagingly of Memories of another time. I read my book, yet I feel a presence, What is this touching – barely brushing? The atmosphere is a tricking morning. Are you really there – oh, no you couldn’t be. I return to my book, yet your presence remains,. Do I hear a whisper, feel a touch, are you free, Oh, No! You could not be, you are not free To brush, to whisper, to curl around another memory, Oh, no, mysticism is not for me, A presence wanting attention, A voice floating, bothering like an insect, I know mysticism is not for me. Or

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/22/2019 8:01:00 PM

Beautifully written!;)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/23/2019 10:06:00 AM

Trying to catch up today. Thank you so much!

Pat Adams

Date: 10/20/2019 11:07:00 PM

I read the title as Morning Mist to begin with. Then, oh wait it's Mystic. The title is what draws us in. Well done. I liked it all but especially the line, to curl around another memory. Very well put........pat

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/23/2019 10:05:00 AM

Thank you so much, Pat.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/19/2019 1:11:00 PM

Oh! Can relate to this sell. Going to my FAVES. Thank you. Panagiota xxx

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/23/2019 10:04:00 AM

Oh, my, thank you for the fav!

Chris Green

Date: 10/18/2019 11:21:00 AM

Pssst, hey, it's me can you hear me? : ) This was really cool my friend. I like how this took me down the page looking for what would happen next and then I find..."or". Hmmm, maybe a sequel coming?

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/23/2019 10:02:00 AM

Ah! You have a new avatar! Now I can hear you! LOL. Probably no sequel unless the "spirit" moves me.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/18/2019 11:17:00 AM

I like that line, to curl around another memory! Well done Sunlite :)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/23/2019 10:00:00 AM

With the tornadoes and all, I'm a bit late to say thanks!