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Morning In the Deep South

planning to plummet into the night? wear your hat, ma’am! wear your gloves, sir! cover your skin with a moonlit coat. no one, should get frostbitten, somewhere in the deep south. a place, where one glides, under the sun. lover’s hands smooth and warm. sweet tea, to cool one’s heated argument. the new year has iced dew — frozen mid air. breath, can hardly move its knees, through the plenipotentiary rows, of brisk attitude. pole to pole seems to be cold. a rash move for the earth! farenheit’s frozen adieu. don’t tip your hat, sir, for your ears might tumble! don’t remove your gloves, ma’am, for the lovely tips might fall! © New Year’s Day 2018

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Date: 1/1/2018 10:53:00 AM
Sounds really cold, well written Kim...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/1/2018 10:55:00 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 1/1/2018 10:23:00 AM
I can relate Kim; here in northern Alabama it got down to 14 degrees last night with a high today of around 30! I enjoyed your realistic yet whimsical fun weather poem Kim!~Che :) PS Happy New Year! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/1/2018 10:54:00 AM
Thank you! Brr!

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