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Morning Essence

Behold the rising mist unfold; hard to resist the sight of trees afloat, a daylight view bestowed upon the eyes that gaze at skies in crimson haze. Creation plays a role - redemption of my soul. ------------------------------ Contest: Verses in Essence Sponsor: Joseph May © 30th June 2020

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 11/16/2021 7:56:00 AM

Good Moring Paul - I am a early morning person who enjoys such essence and time thus I turned to this entry. Your words are true and your entry is very much in poetic form. Have a wonderful day. Keep enjoying poetry. May the mornings and her essence be saluted. Blessings always.

Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/8/2020 3:48:00 PM

Beautifully written, Paul. I love nature :)

Paul Callus
Date: 11/10/2020 1:33:00 AM

Thank you, Angela :) Have a lovely day! Regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/8/2020 9:18:00 AM

Paul, I so love poems like this. Splendid rhyming inside and out adorns the appreciation expressed for the graceful and tranquil essence of Nature. Her beauty is liberating for the spirit! A gorgeous piece, my dear friend. I hope all is well with you and yours. Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 9/9/2020 12:17:00 AM

What a pleasure to have you stopping by Susan! Your presence and pleasant visits/comments have been missed! I have to go out now, but I come back will check if you've got any new posts up. ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/2/2020 4:14:00 PM

A well written verse and like the last two lines. Nicely said. love phyl

Paul Callus
Date: 8/9/2020 2:08:00 PM

Thank you, Phyllis; hope you been enjoying the weekend. Warm regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2020 3:47:00 PM

This is wonderful, Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/17/2020 8:30:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Unfortunately it missed the boat to the final list! Regards // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 7/8/2020 5:56:00 PM

Lovely Paul. I can see the rising sun as I read here. A true blessing to be able to experience such beauty. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 7/12/2020 4:25:00 AM

Thank you Judy. Your lovely comments are appreciated. Blessings // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/5/2020 4:27:00 PM

Your poem draws on the beauty of calming nature Paul and it is very beautiful. Blessings xxoo

Paul Callus
Date: 7/11/2020 6:04:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. Pity you weren't the judge of this contest :) Goodnight, and have a lovely weekend. Warm regards // paul

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/5/2020 1:24:00 PM

Such a lovely piece Paul, nice penning indeed. Trust all is well on your lovely island and keeping safe. Blessings,Gordon

Paul Callus
Date: 7/5/2020 2:59:00 PM

Thank you, Gordon. Over here the heat keeps rising...hopefully it will wither weeds which have been sucking on the juice of corruption! ~ Best regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/4/2020 10:24:00 AM

Your poem helps me to seek for redemption of my soul from the One that created the beauties of Heaven and Earth. Good luck in the contest Paul. Warm regards and hugs, Jenny.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/5/2020 11:44:00 AM

Yours are very beautiful and uplifting comments, Jenny...thank you. Warm regards and hugs // paul

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/1/2020 2:48:00 AM

You wrote this well Paul can't seem to find the inner rhyme to make it work. Good luck in the contest Hope you're well Tom

Paul Callus
Date: 7/3/2020 4:03:00 PM

Thank you, Tom. Hope you too are keeping well. That inner rhyme can be quite tricky!! Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 6/30/2020 6:42:00 PM

Such super imagery i especially like the second stanzas an the uplifting ending to the poem, good luck in the contest Paul:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 7/3/2020 3:10:00 PM

Thank you Jan. Sending my regards To all. Hugs // paul