Morning Blues of London

Morning Blues of London
by Steven Cooke

I see reflections in the window,
My coffee, my only friend.
Waiting for my journey to begin.

My suitcase, my only possession.
Yesterdays clothes, yesterdays photos,
Yesterdays dreams, all packed neatly for yesterdays man.

The whistle, slowly we move off,
Leaving yesterdays life.
As I ponder through my window,
I hear the track mocking,

“It’s all your fault”, “it’s all your fault”, “it’s all your fault”.

No peace for yesterdays man.
We pass fields of lavender, a reminder of when love was sweet.
I see fields of barley, and hay bales,
Where forbidden love was born,
Then ploughed fields, the furrows of betrayal,
Raking through my soul.

We pass a ruined castle, my dreams my hopes, all perished there.
Swept away by the forces of passion, 
Crumbling the walls of yesterdays love.

My window of torment, reveals all. “please go away”
For I want Today’s window,
But my confession, rapes my mind.

You see my wife loves another,
My neglect, my fault, all the judges agreed.

Into a tunnel, a respite from all this.
A moment’s darkness.
Alone again, with my coffee.

I’m still, rolling down the track of despair,
The guard announcing the next station.

“All change at Piccadilly,”
“Connections for nowhere and oblivion”
“Platform Three”.

A rush of bowler Hats cram the doors,
Anonymous souls leading anonymous lives.

And me, with my cup of coffee, alone with the window,
I see reflections once more.
I lay my pen down, 
And I Thank god that’s not me.
Oh how I hate Monday mornings.
Time to leave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Breidenthal Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 5:29 PM
I thought this was a very good poem. No, it's GREAT! Thanks for sharing. Always, Laura
Sweetheart Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 5:34 PM
steven are u close in proximity to all the fires burning out of control and looting luv? or are u safe from all this violence... I hear Liverpool was hit hard this morning .. such tragedies world wide... be safe luv .. excellent poetry .. extolling the unrest...luv..
Johnson Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 4:40 PM
The sanctimony of our own view. Will always show us shades of blue. Our hearts are lonely, so filled with hate. Sitting alone, times getting late. The train moves on with no regard. For your heart felt pain left at the yard. We wake with caffeine to the rescue. In London's morning skies of blue. Hello Steven, I just kind of like to carry on the theme of others muse. Never been to London, always wanted to.
Ratcliffe Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 2:51 PM
I love the way this is written, yesterdays man :) x
A   Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 12:12 AM
amazing write Steven~ very interesting view... take care,..p.d.
Eastman Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 4:08 PM
Very well developed and written. It held my interest.
Chenevert Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 1:33 PM
Well versed and intricatly weaved into the inner reflections of one's self. Enjoyed it very much. Jim
Onclaud Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 12:29 PM
the images of a moment so well captured by your golden quill, steve... much ejoyed; a gem!! come visit! :) huggs, nette
Horne Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 12:12 PM
Clever write, Steven
Cooper Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 11:00 AM
wow that was amazing. loved it
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August 4, 2011 at 6:59 AM
Wonderful poem, I love its fluency and music. Thanks for your comment, Cristina
Zzzzz Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 3:55 AM
A poignant write, full of good metaphor and imagery. Interesting ending, indicating that it is the product of your poetic mind, rather than your given lot! I'm sure it will strike a chord with many, though. A fine poem. Robert.
Wesley Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 6:08 PM
Such despair told in the most moving way. Time heals.
Muzzey Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 4:11 PM
A very moving and wonderful write you have penned. I wish you the best in whatever you do and I welcome you to PoetrySoup.~ Caryl
Ball Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 12:13 PM
An excellent piece and I do hope it's just poetry, for your sake. I have always said, Love is a living thing, and like all living things, without the propere nourishment, it will wither and die. We have to be careful to build a bond when we are married otherwise when you are old you will have nothing left to cling to. Good write, God Bless, JB
Sweetheart Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 11:47 AM
well Steven u surely set the stage with a surprise ending .. amazing poetry luv with a twist as the reader becomes engrossed in every line of poetic art... a canvas painted beautifully.. super .. is London hot these days?
Peranteau Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Awesome write dear poet! This write of yours had such a powerful flow, I read it twice it was so good ! Thanx for sharing ! Have a wonderful Tuesday thru Sunday ! *smiles*...much love, james
Peranteau Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 11:45 AM
Ooops...it's called, "Her wave"
Peranteau Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 11:44 AM
By the way Steven; why don't ya check out a write of mine, posted here on the Soup, 5/4/2011..I think you'll enjoy it. later
It Is Rife With Ambiguity Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 9:29 AM
I love the flow of the language here, and how beautifully meaningful it is. It retains a charming degree of ambiguity that is very engaging. Excellent work!
Onclaud Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 8:13 AM
pure delight, one that begs deep reflection... just amazing, steven! :) huggs!
Mehta Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 9:47 PM
very creative and interesting tale, steven
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 9:08 PM
Your pain is in your poem, Steven. Many of us have been through that, too. Just remember: a woman (or a man) is like a train; miss one and the next one will be along soon.
Johnson Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 9:06 PM
Simply stunning <3 I was captured by your rhyme and your descriptions (:
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