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Morning Blues of London

Morning Blues of London by Steven Cooke I see reflections in the window, My coffee, my only friend. Waiting for my journey to begin. My suitcase, my only possession. Yesterdays clothes, yesterdays photos, Yesterdays dreams, all packed neatly for yesterdays man. The whistle, slowly we move off, Leaving yesterdays life. As I ponder through my window, I hear the track mocking, “It’s all your fault”, “it’s all your fault”, “it’s all your fault”. No peace for yesterdays man. We pass fields of lavender, a reminder of when love was sweet. I see fields of barley, and hay bales, Where forbidden love was born, Then ploughed fields, the furrows of betrayal, Raking through my soul. We pass a ruined castle, my dreams my hopes, all perished there. Swept away by the forces of passion, Crumbling the walls of yesterdays love. My window of torment, reveals all. “please go away” For I want Today’s window, But my confession, rapes my mind. You see my wife loves another, My neglect, my fault, all the judges agreed. Into a tunnel, a respite from all this. A moment’s darkness. Alone again, with my coffee. I’m still, rolling down the track of despair, The guard announcing the next station. “All change at Piccadilly,” “Connections for nowhere and oblivion” “Platform Three”. A rush of bowler Hats cram the doors, Anonymous souls leading anonymous lives. And me, with my cup of coffee, alone with the window, I see reflections once more. I lay my pen down, And I Thank god that’s not me. Oh how I hate Monday mornings. Time to leave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/2/2011 5:29:00 PM
I thought this was a very good poem. No, it's GREAT! Thanks for sharing. Always, Laura
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Date: 8/9/2011 5:34:00 PM
steven are u close in proximity to all the fires burning out of control and looting luv? or are u safe from all this violence... I hear Liverpool was hit hard this morning .. such tragedies world wide... be safe luv .. excellent poetry .. extolling the unrest...luv..
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Date: 8/7/2011 4:40:00 PM
The sanctimony of our own view. Will always show us shades of blue. Our hearts are lonely, so filled with hate. Sitting alone, times getting late. The train moves on with no regard. For your heart felt pain left at the yard. We wake with caffeine to the rescue. In London's morning skies of blue. Hello Steven, I just kind of like to carry on the theme of others muse. Never been to London, always wanted to.
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Date: 8/7/2011 2:51:00 PM
I love the way this is written, yesterdays man :) x
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Date: 8/7/2011 12:12:00 AM
amazing write Steven~ very interesting view... take care,..p.d.
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Date: 8/4/2011 4:08:00 PM
Very well developed and written. It held my interest.
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:33:00 PM
Well versed and intricatly weaved into the inner reflections of one's self. Enjoyed it very much. Jim
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Date: 8/4/2011 12:29:00 PM
the images of a moment so well captured by your golden quill, steve... much ejoyed; a gem!! come visit! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/4/2011 12:12:00 PM
Clever write, Steven
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Date: 8/4/2011 11:00:00 AM
wow that was amazing. loved it
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Date: 8/4/2011 6:59:00 AM
Wonderful poem, I love its fluency and music. Thanks for your comment, Cristina
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Date: 8/4/2011 3:55:00 AM
A poignant write, full of good metaphor and imagery. Interesting ending, indicating that it is the product of your poetic mind, rather than your given lot! I'm sure it will strike a chord with many, though. A fine poem. Robert.
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:08:00 PM
Such despair told in the most moving way. Time heals.
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Date: 8/3/2011 4:11:00 PM
A very moving and wonderful write you have penned. I wish you the best in whatever you do and I welcome you to PoetrySoup.~ Caryl
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Date: 8/3/2011 12:13:00 PM
An excellent piece and I do hope it's just poetry, for your sake. I have always said, Love is a living thing, and like all living things, without the propere nourishment, it will wither and die. We have to be careful to build a bond when we are married otherwise when you are old you will have nothing left to cling to. Good write, God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/3/2011 11:47:00 AM
well Steven u surely set the stage with a surprise ending .. amazing poetry luv with a twist as the reader becomes engrossed in every line of poetic art... a canvas painted beautifully.. super .. is London hot these days?
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Date: 8/3/2011 11:41:00 AM
Awesome write dear poet! This write of yours had such a powerful flow, I read it twice it was so good ! Thanx for sharing ! Have a wonderful Tuesday thru Sunday ! *smiles*...much love, james
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Date: 8/3/2011 11:45:00 AM
Ooops...it's called, "Her wave"
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Date: 8/3/2011 11:44:00 AM
By the way Steven; why don't ya check out a write of mine, posted here on the Soup, 5/4/2011..I think you'll enjoy it. later
Date: 8/3/2011 9:29:00 AM
I love the flow of the language here, and how beautifully meaningful it is. It retains a charming degree of ambiguity that is very engaging. Excellent work!
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Date: 8/3/2011 8:13:00 AM
pure delight, one that begs deep reflection... just amazing, steven! :) huggs!
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:47:00 PM
very creative and interesting tale, steven
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:08:00 PM
Your pain is in your poem, Steven. Many of us have been through that, too. Just remember: a woman (or a man) is like a train; miss one and the next one will be along soon.
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:06:00 PM
Simply stunning <3 I was captured by your rhyme and your descriptions (:
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