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More Than a Feeling

Beneath a pearlescent slice of moon Shining bright against the lonely eventide Abided a laughing, loving tune – musical notes Quite natural, so feral they sung Of a sensuality softly bringing a craving Breaking out in the shadows of starlight Crimped and crinkled like a question mark Asking questions peppered with mystic conceptions On love, romance and passion All the flavors of excitement bound up Within a howling hope so alive it will thrum With a tang, dancing and laughing To the sound of raindrops falling down Sprinkling thoughts so plumb They make the heart desire the fire That thrives when embers are stirred On the inside of those who know love Is much more than the first inklings of a plea Flowing from lips who are pure and free To kiss without ever telling Touch without ever listening And know that this feeling will eventually Lead to more than a mere emotion This affection will ultimately bring about A devotion that can only be expressed Through the time spent sharing the seasons Through the good, the bad and the in between Through everything that comes Into the heart and the soul Of those two who know Love is a living thing – and it flows With a river of kindness Excitement, enlightenment Through waters of pain and sorrow Through silence and noise It breathes in whispers of joy Bringing forth a sense of adoration That is beyond the wildest imagination! Eight word Bardenesque challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton March 14, 2021
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Hamilton Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 4:42 PM
A wonderful write, congrats Gina on a nice win!
Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 2:15 PM
Congrats on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara
Kauffman Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 12:00 PM
Gina, so many wonderful and creative expressions - "feral" notes, "slice of moon," "lonely eventide." Just wonderful my friend! Congratulations on your win! Sending you all the blessings of new life!
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 4:41 PM
Wonderful poem done with such a flourish of imagination. WELL DONE
Eslinger Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 5:03 AM
Your poem reads with a fresh inspiration. Bravo! Alight with a spring-fresh love of language.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 1:13 AM
You draw a great conclusion to which one cannot but agree.
Pettit Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 6:34 PM
Such descriptiveness. A bit longer to read, but worth the extra effort.
Hankins Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 5:06 PM
Incredibly fine writing. Well, there goes my entry!!! Nice work, Gina!
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 4:56 PM
seems bardenesque to ME!! Wow, you go, girl!!!
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