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I At Patuxent Refuge Maryland's Fish & Wildlife Center CASH LAKE boasted a few Comorants And more Ospreys II Across the Komani-Queenstown Route We have our South African waterways A string of tiny lakes and pools Here Coots and Comorants coexist In an otherwise tree-less place III On my walk to church, I spied three On the only tree near the water Less than seven meters tall Bedecked with more fowl than I saw At first, only the three at highest My heart leaped as I spied them all Three times three plus one: Ten Comorants with Commandments

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Date: 11/16/2021 10:40:00 PM
So special is nature, you pen heartfelt poetry my friend.
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/19/2021 10:16:00 PM
Thank u in Shalom of Jesus
Date: 11/16/2021 8:18:00 PM
Anil, this inspires peace and hope, especially your line 'in an otherwise tree less place' - I don't think I've ever seen one but I can imagine them from your descriptive verse~
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/19/2021 10:17:00 PM
Thank you in the shalom / Paz beyond human agency or understanding. Live u my Sister
Date: 11/16/2021 12:24:00 PM
Hi! Anil, Thank you for this poem. I've never saw a Comorants before had to look it up, a lovely bird, I've learned something today. Blessings ~ Debra
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Anil Deo
Date: 11/19/2021 10:19:00 PM
Thank you in the shalom & Protections of Jesus (per psalm 91)

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