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Moral Survival

Eco-locating dreams of a wounded me Rejected by the fins cutters of bloody Reality I had strong arms but could not walk on powdered carcasses of my friends' hopes they had only gills...lungs “saved” me... drifting on a dry land with no melody... copyright@iolandascripca2012

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Date: 12/22/2012 2:13:00 PM
This is a very dark piece of poetry. It just seems a bit heavy for this time of year. But what the heck, we are poets aren't we?
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