Mop Woman

Mop Woman


Near dwarf this woman. 
Foreign born. Minsk,
perhaps. Nose 

a fist. Hair
a whisk broom
only black. Her back

an Orthodox cupola, 
her arms braids of gym rope
lowered to the floor.

Orangutans could climb 
those ropes, hand
over hand, no rose

no purple 
doughnuts 
on their hinds.

Near dwarf this woman.
Foreign born. Minsk,
perhaps.

Her hands, all gristle, 
hang an inch, no more,
above her shining floor.


Donal Mahoney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 16, 2010 at 5:23 PM
Nice one, enjoyed. . .P.D.
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April 16, 2010 at 12:48 PM
wow what a horrid perspective of this poor woman...sorry Donal but I wonder what the view was from her perspective and what man put her in this position and now what man judges her poor frame from his height....sigh...men! (PS beauty is in the eye of the beholder)
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