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there is a fire in the sky it burns, though pale and waning my somber heart and griefs depart midst heaven's weep, now raining ~ oh moon, you pull no tide ... as deep as what's inside ~ there is a flicker in the dark that trembles, bright, to fashion one dreamt escape that curving nape back roads that wind to passion ~ oh moon, you paint no skin ... more flamed than that I'm in ~ there is a glow in even's arc that whispers through the heather and sings to death with twilight breath those hopes for morning's weather ~ oh moon, there are no dreams ... not drenched amid your beams ~ there is a gold within the ink her moonlight eyes, soft-blazing that pulls me deep down to their keep those depths I've drowned, a-gazing ~ oh moon, there is no fur ... as soft as you ... on her ~ ( how you BOTH make me stir ).

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Date: 1/24/2021 11:20:00 AM
*The gold within the ink it truly glows *As golden afternoon sun slowly sinks *Night arrives to gift its many shows* As midnight owl its eyes rapidly blinks. * The prancing moon its soft beams splatters. * O' the washing tides sing and play along.* Writing poetic verses such matters.* As does the music to romantic songs.,, Your moonsong is a gem-a fav..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/25/2021 1:44:00 AM
I adore this little tribute reply, my friend - you should post this on your page - it is quite clearly poetic artistry in itself! (I hope you will do so) Thank you so much, Robert - this one is special to me, too! :-)
Date: 1/9/2021 5:51:00 AM
Greg, so beautifully penned and I love your layout too, well done _Constance
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/25/2021 1:42:00 AM
Many kind thanks, Constance - it's so nice to see your name in my comments - I do miss being here regularly. Blessings! <3
Date: 1/7/2021 3:05:00 AM
Wow. Incredible write. I love it. A fave - it's enchanting and beautiful. God bless you
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/25/2021 1:41:00 AM
Thank you so very kindly, Gina - this means a lot! <3

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