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Moonshiners Ditty-Collaboration

Gonna wake up At the brink of dawn Take a shower Throw my blue jeans on The little red rooster Is my alarm Cock-a-doodle doodling On my farm Gonna water All of my crops Especially My barley and hops Gonna spread out All the bales of hay Where the goats and the horses And the cattle stay In the pasture Down by the creek Where we went When we wanted to sneak A little moonshine I stole it from my dad The best damn moonshine That I ever had Another moonshiner lives next door and he's just one more of a total of four They realize what they're doing ain't right So they watch out for each other day and night I'm gonna go And see a little rodeo Then I'm going dancing To do the do-si-doe Then I'll stop by Over near the school To jump in the river In our swimming pool Gonna get my little lady A cold bottle of wine And get myself a bottle Of my dad's moonshine Copyright © charles messina | Year Posted 2018 08022018PoSoupContest, 'Add A Stanza To My Poem', Charles Messina; 7th stanza incerted by contestant

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Date: 8/29/2018 4:10:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 8/28/2018 3:01:00 PM
Love your addition to Charlie's poem, Curtis...Congratulations on your 1st place win!
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Date: 8/28/2018 1:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Curtis. Excellent stanza choice for Charles' poem.
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Date: 8/28/2018 12:51:00 PM
Curtis, congratulations on your top win, this was tons of fun to read, well done ~
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Date: 8/28/2018 7:12:00 AM
Many congrats Curtis I can see why Charles liked your additional stanza so much, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/27/2018 8:48:00 PM
Curtis, I love the stanza you added to my poem. This poem was actually put into music by a band from Sweden. It's been done in a rock-n-roll style and it should be out soon. Congratulations on your 1st place win! All the best...Charlie
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