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Moonshine Heart

You have a moonshine heart You're beautiful, clear But you have a twist and a sharp taste, bitter to swallow down my throat You get me so drunk off of your love I run to you to forget To drink the liquor that pumps from you And make myself lost in the pain that is you. The funny thing is is that I drink and get drunk to make myself forget But I always remember.

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Patricia Lawton

Date: 10/19/2016 10:51:00 AM

Paige, does it work? does the grog help you forget I'm not a drinker myself so I don't know. I've known some with hangovers but all they do is moan. ha aah. !!!!!!!!!!!!! Welcome to poetrysoup hon. keep them coming.xx

Skat A

Date: 10/18/2016 11:08:00 PM

Paige Lett,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/18/2016 9:33:00 PM

Paige Lett, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@